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Each Night

In the silent twilight I come to greet you on the closet hill A silhouette facing towards the sun Memories stir as my heart succumbs to tears as I fall to my knees at the foot of your grave 8/23/19 Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 Five lines-poetry contest sponsor Dear Heart-Wiishkobi Ode

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Constance La France

Date: 8/31/2019 10:06:00 PM

Frederic, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this sad, sad Free Verse, it really touched my heart and the music is sublime ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2019 3:42:00 AM

- Back with congratulations, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2019 2:01:00 PM

- So fascinating to fable about life after death ... the soul and the physical world - Beautiful written, Frederic - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/24/2019 6:21:00 AM

Soulful it plays out like a lyre in poetic words. Your word choice is awesome. Written from the imagination? Kudos! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/24/2019 4:34:00 AM

Hi Frederic. Amazing similarity, you are right. Your poem is beautifully written. Good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2019 5:54:00 PM

Beautiful but sad imagery Frederic, I know Constance will love this one :-) hugs Jan xx