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After bargaining with God for more time with his soulmate in the twilight of his life he accepts his fate, at last. And so begins the painful, long goodbye. Mountain streams of tears have been shed, there's none left to cry. He's leaving behind his beloved wife of over half a century How lonely it all feels, even with... the constant company of family. Colorful flowers in the spring of his life, wilted. He's conceded defeat to the cancer that is slowly draining life out of him. At peace, waiting for death on his schedule. His grown children beg him to fight on, but he knows from Doc all hope is lost, requests they take care of mom...on his behalf. Date written: 07/25/2020

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Date: 7/2/2021 8:01:00 AM
A great write. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/2/2021 6:16:00 AM
Superb write, Edward, congrats on your win in Brian’s contest!
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Date: 2/2/2021 3:27:00 PM
Great write. We live long enough, we can relate to this aspect of life - losing precious. Thx M.
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Date: 2/2/2021 5:06:00 PM
Thank you, Margarita:-)
Date: 2/1/2021 1:41:00 PM
Congrats for your win with Brian, Edward, and thanks for your poignant example.
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Date: 2/1/2021 1:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
Date: 2/1/2021 10:13:00 AM
Wonderful example, Edward, and I see congratulations are in order for a win. Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/1/2021 1:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
Date: 2/1/2021 9:50:00 AM
Edward, such a sad poem, but something that happens in life over and over, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest and what a great example for your contest, hope I can make you cry with my poem _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/1/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thanks! Oh, I have no doubt that you'll moved me with your morose write, Con:-) The theme is right in your wheelhouse!

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