Dwelling On Sleep

the coolness of my pillow sinking into deepest sleep i forgive the restless night it’s all in the past 10/5/2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/8/2018 11:26:00 AM

I am with Michelle all the way here. This one really resonates with me, as I am more than a bit of an insomniac. And yet, as your wrote, the restless night is forgiven. To be restless is human. To forgive, divine!! Best wishes, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2018 3:42:00 PM

Thanks and for you moving commenta, <3 Kim

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/6/2018 1:36:00 PM

'i forgive the restless night' - wonderful line!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2018 8:53:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/5/2018 3:33:00 PM

Relaxing and makes me want to rest. Well done :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2018 8:55:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi!