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Dust Filled and Windswept 1-9-16

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust Sitting like an old ghost, smothered in rust Its humming sounds of stitches long gone In a quiet pause, time spent looked upon Cobwebs draped and shadows languish about Each dust covered step through lost rooms speak out The evening's hour has a date with the past To light a candle, as long as it last The years of war seemed like only yesterday To come back angry so I stayed away To look through the door where my parents wept To find it empty, dust filled and windswept Yesterday was then and now it will hide Emotional debris caused life to divide To return to a house barren and stark The candle sputters, spent, and all was dark 4/14.18 contest One Nine and Sixteen

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Date: 5/2/2018 9:12:00 PM
An emotional journey in this story, Frederic. Many congrats on your fine win. Elaine
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:28:00 PM
Very well done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:04:00 PM
Such touching couplets Frederick. Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:32:00 AM
Well done. An excellent poem for this contest. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:05:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win, Frederic.
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:43:00 AM
Oh Frederic what a touching poem. You've spun the given lines into such stirring words. Sadly beautiful :)
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Date: 4/14/2018 5:54:00 PM
delicately woven to reflect the remnants of a battle, and finally come home... beautiful, frederic... huggs
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Date: 4/14/2018 4:24:00 PM
Frederic, I really like that you used the couplet for your poem, it is such a pleasant read.
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