Dust Filled and Windswept 1-9-16

Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust
Sitting like an old ghost, smothered in rust

Its humming sounds of stitches long gone
In a quiet pause, time spent looked upon

Cobwebs draped and shadows languish about
Each dust covered step through lost rooms speak out

The evening's hour has a date with the past
To light a candle, as long as it last

The years of war seemed like only yesterday
To come back angry so I stayed away

To look through the door where my parents wept
To find it empty, dust filled and windswept

Yesterday was then and now it will hide
Emotional debris caused life to divide

To return to a house barren and stark
The candle sputters, spent, and all was dark


4/14.18 contest One Nine and Sixteen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/2/2018 9:12:00 PM
An emotional journey in this story, Frederic. Many congrats on your fine win. Elaine
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:28:00 PM
Very well done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:04:00 PM
Such touching couplets Frederick. Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:32:00 AM
Well done. An excellent poem for this contest. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:05:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win, Frederic.
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:43:00 AM
Oh Frederic what a touching poem. You've spun the given lines into such stirring words. Sadly beautiful :)
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Date: 4/14/2018 5:54:00 PM
delicately woven to reflect the remnants of a battle, and finally come home... beautiful, frederic... huggs
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Date: 4/14/2018 4:24:00 PM
Frederic, I really like that you used the couplet for your poem, it is such a pleasant read.
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