Dust

In the tree of moon Dream-filled dust of lust last night Now a rose of dawn From dew and dust you Give the path of moonlit life The flowers in knife Come, no further gloom Let’s plant a tall tree before We return to dust _____________________________________________ 28 March 2017

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Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

Date: 4/7/2017 3:30:00 AM

Gifted tongue has spoken!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/7/2017 5:05:00 AM

Thank you for liking ... No, I don't have that ...

Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2017 11:10:00 PM

Enjoyed reading the Haikus, some of those trees will live hundreds of years more than our lifetime ~*

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2017 10:16:00 AM

Thank you, Eve ...

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/29/2017 12:14:00 PM

Hello Probir. Lovely a thought and wonderfully executed. I very much enjoyed this and its theme. Well done

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2017 10:17:00 AM

Thank you, Lisa ...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/28/2017 9:21:00 PM

Stunning! A 7 and fave. I just love the imagery, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/29/2017 9:02:00 AM

The credit goes to your great sensibility ... I am glad too ... Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/28/2017 11:03:00 AM

Deeply philosophical Haiku dear Probir! A7 my friend!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/29/2017 8:59:00 AM

Well, didn't instill any philosophical touch consciously ... But I must appreciate what you have found as you are a philosopher ... Thank you ...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/28/2017 8:11:00 AM

Love the changing scenes and changing meanings of dust. Lovely piece.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/28/2017 8:49:00 AM

Thank you very much ... Your evaluation lifts this small poem a lot from getting reduced to mere dust ... At least it is now poetry dust! ...

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 3/28/2017 1:22:00 AM

Amazing haikus Probir, good luck in the contest.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/28/2017 8:52:00 AM

Glad that you like it ... Thank you ...

White Wolf

Date: 3/28/2017 1:10:00 AM

Very fragrant, Probir! Lovely imagery going on here! And GL in the contest mate!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/28/2017 9:01:00 AM

It was just these three lines when initally posted which Doug has spoken about ... But then it came to my notice the sponsor has asked for at least eight lines ... Hence the instant compliance ... Eileen has been witty enough to point out the change ... Thank you ...

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/27/2017 9:43:00 PM

Love it, Probir. : ) Had to laugh - I loved it just as the first three lines, then before I could comment on it, it changed.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/27/2017 9:57:00 PM

Ha ha ... Just as I entered it for the contest I saw the stipulation of minimum 8 lines ... the rest had to come there and then for survival ... Hence the desire for the tree ... anyway, thank you so much ...