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Yikes! Arrow targeting me Cupid, please choose another Scars from your last shot remain Heart still bleeding red *For Francine's "Red" Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/17/2012 10:11:00 AM

Revisiting this humorous poem!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/3/2011 1:15:00 PM

It would be nice to find someone, the right someone. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2011 11:51:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn, on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 2/19/2011 6:53:00 PM

Sometimes I feel the same way too, witty and fun poem you have penned for us~~

James Tate

Date: 2/9/2011 5:00:00 AM

Carolyn, your talent shows through on this haiku. The meaning is clear and to the point. Great job. Thanks for commenting on my Tale of Tails. I realize that Rottweilers are treasured pets by some owners. Sorry to cast a bad light on them.

Samir Georges

Date: 2/9/2011 12:25:00 AM

a wonderful experience, reading this poem.

Joe Inka

Date: 2/5/2011 11:15:00 PM

{Yikes!Arrow(s)}They say there's no rest for the broken hearted. By the looks of these comments you're being bombarded. Lol.

George Aul

Date: 2/5/2011 9:48:00 AM

Since you placed ahead of me in the contest, is dinner my choice? Great writing.....thanks for the great comments you send.....George

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 2/5/2011 1:43:00 AM

this is a beautiful Dodoistu.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2011 12:11:00 AM

Congratulations, this contest nearly whizzed right by us. You did GREAT. Luv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/4/2011 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this doditsu, Carolyn. This ended before it began, almost. Love, joyce

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 3:05:00 PM

I see this one won in Francine's contest. I can see why since this dodoitsu is written very well. Congratulations Carolyn.

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/4/2011 2:58:00 PM

If I had my druthers...Cupid would be investing in Cottonelle, Angel Soft & Charmin bathroom tissues. Just let me get my hands on that pudgy trouble-maker! LOL! Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 2/4/2011 2:55:00 PM

This was great.Thanks for that very sweet and nice comments you sent.Congrats on this well deserved win.~LUV~Teresa

Kash Poet

Date: 2/4/2011 1:02:00 PM

Congrats Carolyn on your big win with this gem!Thanks for your ever encouraging words at my pages--kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/4/2011 12:51:00 PM

I was sure of this winning poem!! Congratulations, Carolyn!!

Larry Belt

Date: 2/4/2011 11:20:00 AM

Congrats Carolyn.....Great Write

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2011 10:56:00 AM

Nice one Carolyn. We must heal that bleeding heart beach babe. Many congrats on your fine win in Francine's contest....:)

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/4/2011 10:16:00 AM

Hello Carolyn, Good morning and congratulations on your wonderful poem. I knew this was a winner! Your so full of Wit and whimsy, there is no end to your talent. I love your work-it always inspires me. Lov, Shar

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/4/2011 6:52:00 AM

Good one Carolyn.Many congratulations for this success.

John Freeman

Date: 2/4/2011 6:13:00 AM

Great to see you at the top Carolyn. Scars from your last shot remain Heart still bleeding red. Love these two lines. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/4/2011 1:34:00 AM

jeepers, a real wow, carolyn.. heads up for the high win with huggs..:) nette

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/3/2011 11:29:00 PM

congrats on your third place win in my contest Carolyn, love this

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/3/2011 11:11:00 PM

smile -- and yet, yes, one can feel the beating of, "Your Beauties Priceless Heart," splashed upon this canvas of love not so bright but, within the same breath, "Your Treasures," present also such inward resolve, strength and might which courses and then thus rises, before all of our blessed eyes; exceptional sweet and sour verse, my dear -- love, Always, christopher ~

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/3/2011 11:01:00 PM

smile -- running from Cupid sometimes seems to be the best route especially when the arrow may have somehow broken amid the other side of these, two hearts called unto a Souls tango but, upon the other hand my dear, "Beautiful & Precious, Carolyn Devonshire" ~ one can never know until they do taste the wine from this rainbows arching bow of destinies perhaps meant to, sweetened vines of love -- cont:)