Valsa George Poet Light Verse

Dual Majesty

 Cool wind blows
Chilly feel creeps
Snow glistens
Ice sparkles
Dreamy mist swirls
Wisp of steam curls

A cheery void unfurls
A white quilt flung

Hearths burn
Logs crackle

Sun peeps and thaws
Ice breaks and cracks
Crystals slither
Tiny rivulets flow

Winter’s dual majesty
In full display


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Sara Kendrick October 19, 2024 at 2:00 PM Belated congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this winter work. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Gershon Wolf January 30, 2022 at 11:20 AM Reads as if you made it to 'Winter Carnival!' Enjoy! Angels in the Snow, gw

Christuraj Alex January 30, 2022 at 2:54 AM Great scenes with vivid images and illustrations. Beautiful. Valsa George January 30, 2022 at 3:31 AM Glad you liked it ! Thanks Chris for your encouraging comments !

Bill Baker January 29, 2022 at 3:28 PM Lovely descriptive poet, Valsa. I enjoyed the read, Bill Valsa George January 30, 2022 at 3:30 AM Thank you very much for your kind visit and comment !

Rico Leffanta January 28, 2022 at 11:54 AM Aye from peaceful snowy scenes to cracking ice best enjoyed by the hearth! Aloha! Valsa George January 28, 2022 at 8:43 PM Thanks a lot Rico.... ! Glad you enjoyed my poem.

Victor Buhagiar January 28, 2022 at 9:02 AM We have only otwo displays. A lovely bright blue sky or rain. Lovely poem. Victor Valsa George January 28, 2022 at 8:42 PM Almost the same with us too... ! Only two seasons.... summer and Rainy season .Still our imagination is boosted by what we watch on the TV and what we hear and read. Thanks a lot Victor

Tom Cunningham January 28, 2022 at 8:26 AM Love the winter imagery, nothing beats sitting inside by a log fire watching from inside. Tom Valsa George January 28, 2022 at 8:40 PM Definitely it is a delight sitting close to a warm hearth with logs burning and looking out into the snow laden land. Thanks a lot Tom.

Anil Deo January 28, 2022 at 7:57 AM stunning ... especially if U are in India. It keeps one FEELING cool! unless you are near the Himalayas (I experienced a bit of white Christmases & driving in snow and ice in America/ usa: 1984-2019). Valsa George January 28, 2022 at 8:37 PM We don't have any winter here. But my imagination is aroused by what I see on TV and what I read from books. Thanks a lot brother Anil !

Joseph P. DiMino January 28, 2022 at 7:48 AM Ah, such a lovely description, I was there, in front of a warm fire, toasty and in the wintry moment. Great write! Joe. Valsa George January 28, 2022 at 8:35 PM Thanks a lot Joe.... ! So happy that my lines could impart a warm feel to you !

Sotto Poet January 28, 2022 at 6:24 AM Valsa, you crafted a well-written poem. Stunning metaphors are used in conjunction with considerable detail and remarkable eloquence. Dear Friend, Please accept my sincere regards. Valsa George January 28, 2022 at 8:34 PM Thank you Lasaad for your beautifully worded comment ! Have a great weekend with greater creativity!

Vijay Pandit January 28, 2022 at 6:09 AM Succinctly done, Valsa. Your images paint a picture to bring forth the scene. Valsa George January 28, 2022 at 8:33 PM Thanks a lot Vijay for your beautiful observation....