Drop To Roar - Itty Bitty

Spring sun warms the earth Snow melts, drops, trickles. streams, roars Flood watch in effect

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/22/2014 10:52:00 AM

Yes, just tiny bits of water continuously will cause a flood eventually..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/14/2014 8:31:00 PM

Your last line is a real zinger and makes this a poem to remember! Best luck in the contest Barbara. This is sure to do well. Thanks so much for comments on my work.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/14/2014 9:27:00 AM

Perfect descriptions. We live in a valley near a river and get those pesky flood watches often.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/6/2014 11:29:00 PM

With the amount of snow that we have received this winter, I wouldn't be surprised to see more flooding than usual this spring. A great poem for the contest, Barbara! Good luck!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/6/2014 3:19:00 AM

Oh.....stay safe, Barbara....Love haiku...Loved the middle line....so descriptive

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/5/2014 9:10:00 PM

Great Senryu, Barbara. We have flood watches here but they usually come in November. Good luck in the Itty Bitty and thank you for your kind comments. love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/5/2014 12:34:00 PM

Dear LNC, So glad the snow is melting, but that usually brings flood watches. Stay safe and enjoy spring's beauty. Enjoyed your beautiful poem. Love, Carolyn