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news.sky.com/story/rolling-wreck-battered-car-with-no-windows-plates-or-mirrors-pulled-over-by-police-11189607

THIS IS A PICTURE OF THE ACTUAL VEHICLE - PICTURE SOURCED FROM SKY WEBSITE BUT ORIGINALLY FROM POLICE TWITTER FEED

The driver thought oh what the heck but his motor was a complete wreck It shouldn’t be on the road … Caught by cops; car gets towed His fine, it will be a huge cheque news.sky.com/story/rolling-wreck-battered-car-with-no-windows-plates-or-mirrors-pulled-over-by-police-11189607 01/01/18

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David Smith

Date: 1/15/2018 2:04:00 PM

Your output and range of topics has not diluted your ability to make words count. Sorry did not visit your posts over Christmas. Hope you have stepped into 2018 with confidence. Best regards David in NZ

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2018 2:14:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by David i hope you had a wonderful time over the festive period. I'm awaiting test results on Wednesday so am trying to write lots of fun poems to keep my spirits up .. the waiting is the hardest part:-) hugs jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 1/13/2018 2:32:00 PM

it sounds like one of our neighbours, LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 3:27:00 PM

lol Jack they have err interesting taste lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Old Buck

Date: 1/3/2018 2:29:00 PM

Jan: Except for the 'no plates' it sounds a bit like my first car, 1949 Ford Coupe. Cars like that were a bit more common in my "teen" years. Today they musn't smoke or have loud pipes. Maybe he'd heard his "grand-dad" talk about the good old days. :o) Keep them coming. oldbuck

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 3:27:00 PM

cheers Old buck I think it was once a Rover car but it sure doesn't look like a good model lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/2/2018 5:17:00 PM

:) .. Happy New Year.. Stay warm.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/3/2018 10:44:00 PM

Enjoy him everysecond :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2018 5:31:00 PM

We have hurricane force winds and a red alert - son's flight went tech and was then cancelled due to the weather conditions ... i have him home for one more night:-) hugs jan xx

John Gondolf

Date: 1/1/2018 7:24:00 PM

How funny, I bet the police are still laughing. John

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 3:23:00 PM

I'm sos sorry I thought I'd replied to your comment earlier John:-( hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/1/2018 7:20:00 PM

Lol! I can't believe they were able too drive. It looks like a complete wreck. PS, HAPPY NEW YEAR'S to you and you loved one's. -Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 3:24:00 PM

I can't believe anyone even got behind the wheel!!! Thanks Alexis and my very best wishes for 2018 to you and your family:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 1/1/2018 7:09:00 PM

Lol...I laughed before even reading your great lim

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2018 7:14:00 PM

It's scary anyone would even get in the vehicle let alone drive it! I can't wait to see what fine they get and what points on their licence of course the vehicle wasn't insured I doubt it was taxed and i think it fair to say it wasn't roadworthy!!!:-) Happy new year to you and your family Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/1/2018 6:22:00 PM

i can't believe that car could even move! a great limerick, jan...

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2018 6:28:00 PM

It beggars belief anyone would even get behind the wheel!!! Happy new year Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 1/1/2018 2:49:00 PM

That thing was drivable? You can turn anything into a limerck ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2018 6:27:00 PM

I just see something that inspires me and the brain goes into overdrive - quite literally for this poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/1/2018 10:26:00 AM

Lol, the poor guy should have just caught a cab instead of taking such a risk! Funny and sad at the same time! Happy New Year Jan!~Che :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2018 6:25:00 PM

I can only begin to imagine what the police said when the guy got stopped and wonder why anyone would even get behind the wheel of a wreck like that! Happy new years Che:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/1/2018 8:50:00 AM

Limerick and pic accompaniment! An interesting write, Jan! Happy New Year!