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Dripping Sorrows Collab With Jo

Lightning darkens the sky a little more Thunder silences the rain as it pours The lightning flickers, true face shown to you Thunder nightmares, a part of the deal too Wild wind whistles through the dripping wet leaves Dry earth laps up cool rain in greedy heaves Always cast skywards from a gentle breeze Heartbroken, blown away with sudden ease Lose your worries in the pitter-patter When the sky cries, our pain, does it matter And so the rain soaks right through to my skin Lost in the abysmal pain felt for kin Collab with Jo Poetry Contest 31st March 2023 Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel

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Date: 5/9/2023 3:18:00 PM
A very lovely collab, Dilly. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/9/2023 10:13:00 PM
Thank you Ann, I appreciate your kind words
Date: 5/2/2023 10:43:00 AM
DD, your collaborative poem weeps with sadness. There is such dynamic energy and movement in your words. A beautiful collaboration indeed! Congrats and high fives for your win! Blessings for a broken heart! Only one who has experienced heartbreak can write so succinctly about it.
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Date: 5/2/2023 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Sam, I soak up emotions everywhere. Thank you for your kind words
Date: 5/2/2023 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful blend of the two of you. Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 5/2/2023 7:48:00 AM
Many thanks Paula, your kind words are much appreciated
Date: 5/2/2023 1:28:00 AM
Superb work, DD, congratulations, enjoyed our collab:)
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Date: 5/2/2023 4:25:00 AM
Thanks Jo :)
Date: 4/5/2023 4:57:00 AM
Lovely collaboration ! The thoughts and style blend beautifully together. Agree with what Wendy has said.
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Date: 4/5/2023 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Valsa, your comments mean a lot x
Date: 3/31/2023 3:04:00 PM
The added stanzas meld perfectly DD. Impossible to tell, one poet's work from the other. Combined it makes one very beautiful poem. So well done. A treat to read.
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Date: 3/31/2023 3:07:00 PM
You're very kind Wen

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