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Drenched In Red

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taste this veil of mystery
    a fragrant flower blooms there
      lounging on dusk’s thirsty shore
          ...lips turn to red wine



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(( for Francine Robert's "RED" Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 22, 2011 at 11:55 AM

Congratulations Nette, on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

February 5, 2011 at 10:13 AM

this has such a haiku feel to it too, Nette.Congratulations on your win! Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

February 5, 2011 at 9:55 AM

Well I must repeat the poets below, wonderful write and a well deserved win my dear...luv Michael

Joyce Johnson

February 4, 2011 at 5:23 PM

Very romantic writing. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Robert Pettit

February 4, 2011 at 5:19 PM

Nette, this is a superb entry. Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.

Kory Calhoun

February 4, 2011 at 3:30 PM

Good one! An aged Bourdeaux, perhaps? Chateau Latour? Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

February 4, 2011 at 1:23 PM

Hey Nette another big win !Congrats !Thanks for your warming comments at my pages---kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

February 4, 2011 at 10:58 AM

Hello Nette, You know I love this one. Congratulations on your win my friend. Such love and romance in your words. Lov, Shar

James Fraser

February 4, 2011 at 10:34 AM

This is delightful Nette, and one can see why it is on the winners podium. Many congrats....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

February 4, 2011 at 10:10 AM

Nette, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 4, 2011 at 8:13 AM

Congrats Nette on your big win in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend.. a super cool one.. luv.. enjoy..

Tahera Mannan

February 4, 2011 at 6:54 AM

Wow.Many congratulations for this success.

John Freeman

February 4, 2011 at 6:24 AM

Good to see you in the top 8 Nette. ...lips turn to red wine, a great line. Enjoy Agape, Moses

Francine Roberts

February 3, 2011 at 11:33 PM

congrats on your 6th place win in my contest Nette, wonderful entry

Carol Fillmore

February 3, 2011 at 9:01 AM

Nette, this is very lush! Really enjoyed reading this and best of luck in the contest:) great title, too! Thanks so much for your wonderful comment on "Haiku For All Seasons", so appreciated. This was one of those poems that flow out of me unexpectedly on occasion: these I call 'poetic eruptions' LOL

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 3, 2011 at 6:20 AM

Saying "hi" to my gal pal and hoping all is well with u today Nette my friend... thankxx for all your sweet wonderful and encouraging comments on my poetry luv..