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The sky is dark blue this dreamy night, and in the vast canopy only one star is winking; it beckons to my soul so I reach out with my finger, and magically stars are sprinkling and sinking. Like a waterfall of lights they swirl, twirl and spin, and I am taken up in a whirlwind of bliss and delight; then, I find myself in a lush enchanted forest,where upon a beautiful unicorn horse I fly the night. I ride this ethereal creature all my dreamy night, over streams flowing and forests and valleys green; to stunning hidden places and wondrous cities, but sadly, dawn is winking and I must leave this scene. _________________________ December 17, 2015 Poetry/Verse/Dreamy Night Copyright Protected, ID 15-1085-378-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Late November, 2018 Standard sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 11/20/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thank you Janice for visiting with the beautiful, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/19/2018 8:13:00 PM
This is really beautiful! Janice
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Date: 11/19/2018 2:27:00 PM
Connie, thanks for visiting my poem with comment and congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/19/2018 12:49:00 PM
An enchanting dream to inspire Constance. Congratulations on your First Place win in Brian's contest! : )
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Date: 11/18/2018 5:30:00 PM
Thanks Edward for visiting with the beautiful and the congratulations ~
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Date: 11/18/2018 11:14:00 AM
Such a beautiful, well-written poem, Constance!:-) Heartiest congratulations on your deserving win!
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Date: 11/16/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris and Sun for visiting my poem with comments, appreciate a lot ~
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Date: 11/15/2018 6:44:00 PM
I've seen a night or two like that, but could never write about them so well.
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Date: 11/15/2018 2:45:00 PM
The worst part about dreams like this is waking up. But, this is one that we don't have to wake up from because we can read this enchanting poem anytime we like. This was beautiful and magical my friend. Nicely crafted.
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