Dreamy Autumn

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float dreamy clouds crimson leaves tangerine red swirling twirling breeze whispering geese heading balmy south August 13, 2022 Ninette Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May syllables checked by HMS.com

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/21/2022 9:10:00 PM

This beautiful autumn poem was a delight to read Mala. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/20/2022 5:04:00 AM

Very picturesque and scenic. Your poems, always, are alive and lively.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/20/2022 5:21:00 AM

Thank you, My Dear Friend. I feel inspired with your comments.

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2022 11:48:00 AM

Beautiful fall imagery Malabika, Congrats on your win

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/20/2022 5:20:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph. Enjoy participating in your contests.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/19/2022 9:56:00 AM

Mala, my friend, you have captured the essence of fall and put it into the bottle of your poem to keep through every season. There is a lyrical movement to your words. Congratulations on your win! Blessings and hugs!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/18/2022 5:55:00 PM

Dearest Mala, you capture the splendor of Fall with dreamy imagery flowing smoothly from your golden pen. Such beautiful use of color and movement just sweeps me up and away like the leaves swirling twirling - love it! Your artistry shines like the daystar! I expect to see this finish high on the win list. Warmest wishes and hugs, my lovely friend.. ~Susan

Valsa George

Date: 8/15/2022 10:14:00 PM

Dreamy clouds, tangerine leaves, crimson sky, geese flying, breeze whispering.... how many images you have strung together into this beautiful ninette.... ! All the Best dear friend.

Constance La France

Date: 8/15/2022 1:35:00 PM

Mala, your Ninette is really lovely, best of luck in the contest, blessings ~Constance