Dreams of Childhood

"How sweet to the heart are the scenes of my childhood"

            Samuel Woodworth, 1785-1842


standing on the window of my friend’s house,
we let childhood imaginations loose,
fairy tale of gods demons we espouse.

grassland with myriad flowers to choose,
dragonflies, butterflies to play and chase,
Jack farmer’s friendly talking sheep and goose!

our dreams had wings, no reality base,
killed enemy warriors in brave fight,
our weapons were satchels or pencil case!

however night saw the fall of our might,
with darkness crept out our deep inner fear,
close to mother we stayed, hiding our fright!

life was full of love, yet purpose not clear,
good old childhood days will always be dear!


1st placement
Terza Rima Poetry contest
Constance la France
Written 18/11/2020
10 syllables each (PS counter)
rhyme sequence as suggested!
ABA BCB, CDC, DED, EE!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 11:40 AM
Very nice picot you've painted Krish. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Thanks Linda!!Greatly appreciate your supportive words!!
Y. Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 7:02 AM
Hi Krish, Congratulations on your 1st place win;-) Alexis
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 7:06 AM
thanks Alexis! Thanks for your visit!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:49 AM
Especially like the second verse, Krish! Congratulations on 1st place!
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Thanks Kim! So pleased with your feedback! Thanks indeed!
Pandit Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:30 AM
Well done, Krish--BIG congrats on your TOP win.
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Thanks Vijay! Pleased it is liked! Thanks for your visit!:)
La France Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 1:28 AM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this excellent and enchanting poem _Constance
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 1:43 AM
Constance, Thank you! Very happy to have tried this new format and enjoyed writing it! Thank you for hosting the contest and for your generosity in rewarding me with a top placement win!!:)
Mcintosh Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Lovely write ... best wishes in the contest :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Thanks Regina! Pleased to get your quick feedback!
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