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Dreams Foretold

Were these dreams foretold, or Happenstance These dulcet Whispers of prophesy From bereft desert to Dank green soil of rebirth With you; only a Daub of dust as reminder That I ever doubted the path to us, the Folly of Remorse for yesteryear's Wafting redolence Perchance, the reign of rash impulses In the limit of foresight, were the Flutters Of emerging wings, lifting me to hope's Horizon, and landing in your hands. 1/22/19 Eight word challenge-Bardenesque Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 2/26/2019 5:58:00 AM
I truly believe that hope is the main ingredient to elevation trust and belonging. You gathered in all up in a few amazing lines, bless your dear heart, have a wonderful day, xo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/27/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words!
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Date: 2/26/2019 5:58:00 AM
Date: 2/23/2019 10:48:00 PM
Wonderful romance, Michelle, good use of the required words.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/27/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Sheri, for your visit and comment!
Date: 2/21/2019 5:52:00 PM
So well done Michelle congrats on a fine placement!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/22/2019 1:45:00 PM
Thank you for placing me in your contest, John!
Date: 1/25/2019 2:14:00 PM
Lovely, good luck with the contest.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/25/2019 6:41:00 PM
Appreciate that, M.L!
Date: 1/22/2019 4:44:00 PM
Michelle, so brightly done, it has suspended me in a silent awe. I do not have my voice yet back, so I cannot speak. I saw this challenge and thought "not me" now I am thinking "triple not me".
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/23/2019 1:36:00 AM
This is such flattering praise, I am humbled!

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