Dreams

In the silence of tomorrow lay dreams Vibrant, they wait-impatient- breathless!

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Joy Wellington

Date: 10/24/2010 2:41:00 AM

Dearest Audrey, always in my corner. Thanks so much for being there, I really mean that. May your dreams materialize into one big reality. Blessings. Joy (Jew)

Joshua Harris

Date: 10/21/2010 5:18:00 PM

Great poem, it really makes you think.

Destiny Echo

Date: 10/21/2010 12:03:00 PM

I can't even explain the feeling reading this gave me... Nostalgia, and it left me just as dreams do, Breathless. Very well written :) -Echo

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/18/2010 1:47:00 PM

If they're anything like the other dream you wrote about, I can't wait either, Audrey!

Kim Hilliker

Date: 10/17/2010 12:34:00 PM

I like it! Good job, Audrey!

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/16/2010 10:26:00 PM

Wow Audrey, I absolutely love this one ;) filled with hope. Love Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/16/2010 10:43:00 AM

what a wonderful way of describing dreams! & lucky for those who are at the receiving end of these dreams< i am sure they are wonderful! --nikko :)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/15/2010 8:37:00 PM

Yes I love this one too. your great

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/15/2010 9:14:00 AM

Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Audrey. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol