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“hearts desires spawns all manifestation cause of repeated reincarnation” ~ by poet ___________________________________ Dream within a dream, it seems surreal Both waking and sleeping states, look real Immersed in our life role, we plot and scheme Before we realise, we flow downstream Upon life replay, it feels unreal Shift - material to ethereal Trancelike state awakes, to poise natural Shadowy, dreamlike forms no longer beam Dream within a dream Thoughts hazy fade, as staid silence redeems Pristine awareness, free from erst daydreams Dreams imaginary hold no appeal Delusion merely ego spawned scandal Replaced by inner divine light agleam Dream within a dream 24-May-2021 Writing prompt - Dreamlike - poetry contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 6/2/2021 3:16:00 PM
Seeker, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like your image and quote too, peace - Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 7:37:00 PM
Thanks for hosting Constance! Always a delight to participate :)
Date: 6/2/2021 12:08:00 PM
It's a wonderful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/2/2021 7:36:00 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 5/24/2021 3:51:00 PM
wow, it's like you REALLY got the essence of the words Dear Heart gave us. I can't even think how to approach this contest yet, but here YOU are giving us something fantastic!!
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Date: 5/24/2021 7:14:00 PM
I’m sure you’ll conjure something fantastic in the blink of an eye!
Date: 5/24/2021 8:40:00 AM
Liked your poem. I am too verbose. You get quickly to the point. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/24/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Victor! I like rhyming formats but free verse seems to be more popular, as far as I see

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