Dream Turned Love Tale

Hold me - lift me, somehow please
Take me away from the darkness
Wish it to be a dream of dusk
Rather than a tale of our life together

What a sinister all around our soul
Turn on the brightness yet again
My feet giving no sings of repair
Is this just a dream or lifelong tale

A beautiful future we dream of jointly
Is turning pale with sigh and breathe
Help me manage to move on somehow
This unfathomable darkness - a disdain

Finally i am in his arms safely saved
Suddenly he sparkles my eyes and soul
Trying to again figure out is it a dream
Whatever it is ....i wish it to be continued

Wonder! a sparking Solitaire had my name
Its light was enough to make me sane
I love you beyond life is what i could say
Thank heavens for replacing gloom to glee

Now I realize darkness was not to betray
In his arms the fear and pain gone away
World brightened with pious love unseen 
Wish it to be continued forever as truth...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/25/2011 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sneha in Matt's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:55:00 AM
Congrats Sneha on your big win in the Finish the Dream contest.. super cool luv..
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:10:00 PM
Nice writing. Congratulations on winning in the contest with this entry.
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Date: 2/23/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win~~
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Date: 2/23/2011 5:01:00 PM
A great job Sneha on your worthy poem's top ten honor. Congratulations on your eighth place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:10:00 PM
Simply Beautiful, dear Sneha. many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Elaine
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Date: 2/23/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/23/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest, Sneha
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on you wonderful story, and it's very fine win in the contest, Sneha. Enjoy! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:01:00 AM
Turning fear into joy, great job and great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/28/2011 1:44:00 PM
Happy that you have found a nice sanctuary turning gloom into glee and dream into love tale, Sneha
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