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Dream Land

he dreams of an escapade very much like a crusade striving to free a mermaid imprisoned near wild cascade as evil lurks in the shade he starts a most silly charade and tricks his foes with marmalade saves the mermaid then evades winning a pint of pink lemonade AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on January 16, 2021 for contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (42) ANY FORM ANY THEME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 10TH on September 13, 2018 for contest UNSHEATH YOUR SWORD sponsored by JOHN LAWLESS and on January 18, 2018 for contest DREAMS sponsored by NAYDA IVETTE NEGRON

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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/18/2021 1:50:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win. So cute. "Loved It" Enjoy your win/day with blessings................
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2021 8:22:00 PM
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Thanks, Paula. Much appreciated ~
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/19/2018 8:42:00 AM
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Very cute, mono rhymes are very tough, but this is so funny, you think it's serious and then the marmalade line. lol
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/19/2018 10:29:00 AM
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Thank you, John. Most appreciated.
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2018 4:05:00 AM
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very clever monorhyme line good luck in the contest i loved the marmalade line !!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/19/2018 10:28:00 AM
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Thank you, Jan. Much appreciated.

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