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Oh, my Dear Little One ... Sleep, and sleep soundly ... Dream of the wispy realms, Where the stars dance and spin, For the morrow shall bring much change. Such horror we have left behind ... Such a long, arduous journey lays ahead, But now, now you are safe within my firm embrace ... There is naught shall harm but a strand of your tresses, So long as I hold you here, cared for and careful, Quiet and calm within the favor of my gaze. Your family may be gone, lost to evil ... You may be but a child of humans - Creatures who carry the fire sticks, Who have brought such terror and death to my kind, But you offered your life for mine, And I shall not fail you, Little One! I have seen more courage and ire In the depths of your little blue eyes, Than in ten of my kind OR yours, All for MY sake, All to confound and deflect Those who would have kept me forever within the bars. But you freed me ... You stood up to take the spear for me When they came to end my time, And I owe you the Life Debt ... But much more than that, This journey has shown me the breadth Of your kindness and wisdom, Far beyond your years, And far beyond my understanding or station. Yes, Dear Little One, sleep deeply and dream! There may be more tragedy ahead, But for now I shall insure the sweet meanderings of your slumber, And send to your thoughts the joys of my kind ... The breath of the jungle in spring! The span of the plains when the rains bring sweet water! The trickle of the streams when they swell with sustenance! The cool, quiet depths of the lake when the days are long and hot! The expanse of the heavens in the cold of the short time! The springy cool of the highland mosses beneath my pads as I run! The mischief of the cubs when they come to play! And even the joy of the hunt ... Yes, even that wondrous thrill I would send to your dreams ... For there is nothing sweeter to my kind, Or more dear to the essence of all in the wild, Especially under a swollen August moon, When the sounds of the deep forest call to my being! All these wonders I send to your dreams, Little One, To those wondrous, wispy realms, That you may awake with a smile, And the glow of the morning in your heart, And the hopes of good fortune to let soar your spirits! Whatever may lay ahead, I shall give you that ... You are my purpose now, always ... Sleep, and sleep soundly ... Oh, my Dear Little One! ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Image Me A Poem" Poetry Contest, Mystic Rose, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/25/2020 9:40:00 PM
The photo melts my heart, and your words hold me so close. This is beautiful and tender. To wrap around such a moment, is to feel at peace. Your thoughts take me there. Congratulations Greg on placing first in this contest. I can see why. I would like to save this in my favorites. ~ Brandy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/26/2020 5:04:00 AM
Oh, that's very sweet of you, Brandy, and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one ... it was for a contest where the images were supplied, and this one intrigued me the most, so I concocted a story behind it, (which I may expand on sometime). Many thanks for taking the time to read it! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 10/10/2017 11:58:00 PM
Again I find a magnificent poem that you have created! This awes me in its conception, imagery and delivery! A fav... thanks...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/11/2017 12:19:00 AM
Thank YOU, Robert - so very kind of you, my friend, and please know how highly I value your opinion! Blessings! :-)
Date: 10/7/2017 2:37:00 PM
Wonderful piece, great write. Congrats on your win with this splendid piece.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/7/2017 8:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Olusegun, I greatly appreciate that - so pleased you enjoyed my entry! Blessings! :-)
Date: 10/4/2017 4:39:00 PM
You've written a short story of verses, Greg. Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2017 11:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lin - I may try writing a lot more about this, as I have a story in my head about what happens before and after this poem - the friendship between the tiger and girl. :-)
Date: 10/4/2017 4:27:00 PM
A fantastic offering for the contest Greg. I think this one will be well received. Good luck!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2017 11:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, Richard - I appreciate that!
Date: 10/4/2017 4:27:00 PM
I see it has already won! Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2017 11:37:00 PM
Blessings and thanks (again) my friend!
Date: 10/4/2017 1:52:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your win with this exceptional write !
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2017 11:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much, BW, that's very kind of you, and so appreciated! :-)
Date: 10/4/2017 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Gregory!
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:11:00 AM
Such a brilliant write my friend, I loved reading this excellent poem! You have impressed me by your writing skill with this ingenious poem, What a grandiose piece, Great work!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2017 11:43:00 PM
You're too kind, Russell, and I so greatly appreciate the blessing of your comments and friendship! All my best to you and Emma, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 10/3/2017 8:37:00 AM
Has an ethereal feel and is filled with lovely images! GL Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/4/2017 1:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim - much appreciated, my friend!

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