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Downpour of Words

The Earth stills only the howl of the weeping wind can be heard on these barren hills. I am drifting. floating  the storm broke and a myriad of doves pierced clouds how pale I must look amid the sea of crimson I ponder about my mother. thunderous stone splitting the rain had been unlocked. dancing in her underwear in shallow water & nothing in her moves could stop suddenly, I am an aesthetic dove flying free soaring into the silvery heavens downpour of words inscribed in the memory of skin
Written: January 22, 2023
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Pandit Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Creative write my friend. Ruminating in memories. Well done.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 10:30 PM
Clever write and a tribute to your mother.
George Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 9:16 PM
I am sure the memories of your mother transported you to a different realm. A down pour of rain and a down pour of words. You and the sky are equally productive.... ! Beautiful....
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