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Enclosed Rhyme
One or more verses with a rhyme scheme of "abba" (that is, where the first and fourth lines and the second and third lines rhyme).

       

Let us stroll down memory lane; skipping past the hurts locked in time. Choosing days where life felt sublime; let's revisit those once again. Remember when you were a child; think of the games you played for fun. And when you hit that first home run, your team applauded; how you smiled! Hide-and-seek and Mother May I were fun games you didn't want to end. And Bogeymen was all pretend; every parent told that white lie. Marbles were treasures you traded and hoarded like bubble gum cards. Girls played hopscotch in the schoolyards, and the boys joined once persuaded. In the Summer, you'd stay outside until it got too dark to play. Christmas was your favorite day, nothing could compare with Yuletide. Memories you cannot relive preserve glimpses of times gone past. Unique times, your heart has amassed, enjoying all life had to give.

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Date: 8/23/2019 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving podium win Emile! Carefree days of youth make me smile. : ) xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/23/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/23/2019 12:10:00 PM
Back with congrats on another win, well done Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/23/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/23/2019 11:44:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme. So beautifully penned of days past, well done ~
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Date: 8/23/2019 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/22/2019 11:32:00 PM
Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/23/2019 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/22/2019 2:28:00 PM
Such simple games brought joy in youth. You took me right back to those hopscotch days of wonderment in your lovely rhyme Emile. I loved this trip down memory lane. Thank you my friend. xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/22/2019 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Connie, it's always fun to remember days gone by my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/18/2019 7:21:00 PM
Emile, this is a wonderful, nostalgic poem! Brought back a lot of good memories. Well written enclosed rhyme. Blessings, Kim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/18/2019 8:46:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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