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Dot To Dot In Lines of Monorhyme

(revised slightly for a typo) Dot to dot and likely twelve times more – dot to dot. I make this game for my little tot. On construction paper I now plot where each dot goes, and where each dot goes not! So what am I creating? I nearly forgot! Aha! Right here for a dot I’ve found a nifty spot. I think my tot will like this game a lot. In no time you will see just how far I got! Can you guess the picture I will soon have wrought? Here’s a hint. It’s something that can trot! Dec. 4, 2022 For the 'Dot to Dot' Poetry Contest of Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 12/24/2022 12:16:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, excellent poem
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Date: 12/22/2022 8:55:00 PM
My guess is a horse! Congrats Andrea! I like this a lot :)
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Date: 12/22/2022 3:08:00 PM
Very cute, Andrea! Congratulations on 3rd place in my contest!
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Date: 12/22/2022 2:09:00 PM
Full of childlike delightful whimsy and laughter, Andrea! Congratulations on your win with this wonderfully creative Dot to Dot.
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Date: 12/5/2022 7:00:00 PM
Impressive. I've started and restarted this poem, and its in limbo, because I know what my message is but not how to word it.
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Date: 12/5/2022 5:43:00 PM
I just adore this, Andrea! Recalls many happy memories from one's youth. Fantastically original and a really insightful viewpoint,
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Date: 12/4/2022 8:30:00 PM
Uniquely wonderful, Andrea, that's a great perspective, a grown up creating a dot to dot for a child:)
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Date: 12/4/2022 8:16:00 PM
I found dot to dot in a game of two line made by one of two player on a page fill with dot and the winner is the one whose line complete the most square, your though seemed more imaginative.
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Date: 12/4/2022 3:16:00 PM
Love this Andrea ! Brings to mind childhood galore .. fun and games and Dr. Seuss! Fun fun fun ! Is it a horse ?! Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 12/4/2022 2:40:00 PM
Well, so glad I can write this out because my voice is a little horse today. but I don't have the foggiest idea~ so what is it?
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Date: 12/4/2022 11:35:00 AM
Ahh!! A double puzzle. A horse maybe since it can trot, but it could be me after eating Chinese. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 12/4/2022 10:43:00 AM
Hahaha this is brilliant..Great monorhyme.
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Date: 12/4/2022 10:38:00 AM
A pony for your thoughts, i'm offering.' Its from my, mining; the richest proffering'
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Date: 12/4/2022 10:25:00 AM
A cute and clever one, Andrea. I, too, wrote my "dot to dot" poem from the perspective of a child. I hope we both do well in the contest.
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