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Doors, Doors, and Doors

And in my dream I walk corridors with old creaking floors, deep in the sanctum of my soul echoes stir calling me to come; soon, I enter a hall of doors, doors and doors . . . red doors painted bright, green doors with polished knobs. Blue, deeply and darkly lovely blue, varnished doors, a heavy ornate church door, ajar, beckoning hymns drift; one hundred year old doors with brass chimes, portals to long ago, wide barn doors in antique grey, opening wide, thresholds. Doors with stripped, chipped white paint, oh my beating heart, rounded doors, wooden doors, some to push, some to pull; through a long forgotten door the wreckage of my life . . . A door opens, new and polished shiny, the entrance to where? Closed doors, swinging doors, locked doors with a sign Do Not Open, doors with steps, doors with brass keys dangling; and doors with chimes, press here for access, my dear, then, I see two doors side by side, a simple cedar door- a golden door. Oh, I stand unsure, which door? I hesitate and then, I put my hand on the knob of the golden door- nirvana is beyond; then, I open the simple cedar door, which takes me to the here and now, and I breathe a sigh of relief, yes, this is exactly where I need to be. ______________________ March 24, 2017 Poetry/Prose /Doors, Doors, and Doors Copyright Protected, ID 03- 887-007-24 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Doors sponsor, Richard Lamoureaux, Judged 08/2021 Seventh Place

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Date: 4/16/2017 12:55:00 AM
Thanks so much for entering Constance. I was happy to see your name on the winners list.
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Date: 3/26/2017 4:49:00 PM
I love this, I used to always think of my brain full of doors, some locked. Some open. Makes a person think, think, think. Awesome words :)
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Date: 3/26/2017 8:00:00 AM
A wonderful write BW. I love the ending.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2017 3:40:00 PM
James thanks for visiting and for the wonderful ~
Date: 3/26/2017 5:35:00 AM
My goodness Broken Wings. Good Morning. I bow to you and your entry. This is well thought out with much attention to detail. Honestly. I found this entry top level writing and execution. The theme makes the reader look within and ponder. Your ending line speaks volumes. I believe the path we take is exactly where we should be. Somehow that's true. I also loved the expression of golden door. Beautiful in every way in its entirely.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2017 3:43:00 PM
Lisa thank you for your lovely comment so appreciated ~
Date: 3/25/2017 2:18:00 PM
This makes me think of the brain and all the choices we have. What do I want to think about? Everything, it seems, must be processed carefully and adequately. If not, the door we do not wish to open flies off the hinges of its own accord. You have a good handle on all of this and your work is a fine bit of carpentry that is appreciated very much. Your collection is through a door I open often to have a chance to experience something very pleasant.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2017 3:45:00 PM
Duke thanks for visiting with your wonderful comment ~
Date: 3/25/2017 1:31:00 PM
I walked through all the doors shown by you. Great poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/25/2017 1:34:00 PM
Alisha thanks so much for visiting and taking the journey
Date: 3/25/2017 10:02:00 AM
Beautiful, Constance! You pass through the doors of time while walking along the corridors of your life. #7 Regards // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 3/25/2017 11:33:00 AM
Paul, thanks for that lovely comment and for the 7 ~
Date: 3/25/2017 7:59:00 AM
Hi BW: Your poetic substance of doors inspired me to write a poem on a washing machine. Please read it . It's called love in cycles. Your prose was beautiful!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/25/2017 11:32:00 AM
Ralph, happy to inspire always, thanks for visiting my poem ~
Date: 3/25/2017 1:35:00 AM
Sounds like you made the right choice! Such a great imagination. I really enjoyed this.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/25/2017 11:31:00 AM
Wolf, yes mine is a simple life and I love it, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 3/24/2017 1:53:00 PM
So many beautiful doors!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/24/2017 3:06:00 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem~
Date: 3/24/2017 12:15:00 PM
What a grand poetic journey I have just been on. Your descriptive phrases were fantastic my friend. I really like the feel of this poem, it has many dark edges and passageways, but that final door, the plain cedar door led you to where you wanted to be. I really liked that. Nicely done
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Constance La France
Date: 3/24/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thank Chris for following my journey with the doors, yes the plain cedar door is where i needed to be... thanks for visiting and for the compliment~

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