Domesticated Violence

They said love was tender,
so I offered my throat
to your ghost-mouth,
let your breath curl into mine—
viscous as syrup left out,
subject to the shape of its jar.

Your bombardment 
of devotion felt like hail,
each for your own good
sharpened
to a fine mother's edge.

A crate arrived
that you wouldn’t let me open,
labeled not yours,
but warm to the touch,
and I swear
I heard it weeping.

When I finally pried it open,
the dark inside eclipsed me,
but not like the moon—
like a father 
who's sat too close in the pew.

No light gets in. 
No light wants to.

I closed it back up
before you came in.
Then we went to breakfast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fowler Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 6:55 PM
Well done Jaymee. Congratulations! :)
Thomas Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 12:41 PM
Linda, you are always so sweet to comment. Thank you.
Layne Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 8:34 AM
I thought you used the language of this contest so well - bombardment of devotion - was my favorite. Congratulations!
Thomas Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 12:45 PM
Oh, Trina. Thank you so much. I love rearranging language more than anything in the world, and this was such an interesting, challenging prompt. I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to read my piece. Have a great weekend.
Woods Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on your win! I loved your poem! Ty for entering! Xo
Thomas Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 12:41 PM
Thank you, Crystol. I am terrible at replying to comments, but I sure do love getting them. It was honestly a thrill to place in your contest. Thank you again and have a great weekend.
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