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Domesticated Violence

They said love was tender, so I offered my throat to your ghost-mouth, let your breath curl into mine— viscous as syrup left out, subject to the shape of its jar. Your bombardment of devotion felt like hail, each for your own good sharpened to a fine mother's edge. There was a box you wouldn’t let me open, labeled Not Yours, but warm to the touch, and I swear I heard it weeping. When I finally pried it loose, the dark inside eclipsed me, but not like the moon— like a father who's sat too close in the pew. No light gets in. No light wants to. You put your pants on, and eat me for breakfast.

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Date: 4/16/2025 6:55:00 PM
Well done Jaymee. Congratulations! :)
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 4/26/2025 12:41:00 PM
Linda, you are always so sweet to comment. Thank you.
Date: 4/14/2025 8:34:00 AM
I thought you used the language of this contest so well - bombardment of devotion - was my favorite. Congratulations!
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 4/26/2025 12:45:00 PM
Oh, Trina. Thank you so much. I love rearranging language more than anything in the world, and this was such an interesting, challenging prompt. I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to read my piece. Have a great weekend.
Date: 4/14/2025 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I loved your poem! Ty for entering! Xo
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Date: 4/26/2025 12:41:00 PM
Thank you, Crystol. I am terrible at replying to comments, but I sure do love getting them. It was honestly a thrill to place in your contest. Thank you again and have a great weekend.

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