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Do You Hear Me Premiere Contest Winner

do you hear me yelling? I just hear an echo. But maybe May be my voice travels as it repeats gusting among desert winds like small dust devils Bouncing off hills maybe it's nudging birds in flight off their trajectory Lifting up dragonflies scattering pollen for the bumble bees. Do you hear me? just hear my echo. hello hello why why my words repeat through my brain dancing be- tween my ears like pinballs under glass. Mental flippers thrusting ding ding to keep my words alive on a trajectory to your reading eyes to take your soul somewhere new Written: May 14, 2023 1st Place Contest winner A Brian Strand Premiere No 1217 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 5/20/2023 9:11:00 PM
Very impressive ~
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Date: 5/20/2023 11:13:00 AM
Congrats on the win...this is excellent indeed!
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Date: 5/20/2023 6:11:00 AM
As I have guessed, you stole away with the trophy! Hearty Congratulations dear friend for your spectacular achievement !
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Date: 5/20/2023 12:41:00 AM
What a unique blow!!! Congratulations..
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Date: 5/19/2023 11:33:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your first ranking in Brian Strand PS contest. You crafted the poem very ingeniously.
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Date: 5/19/2023 10:26:00 AM
EXCELLENT BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP. Have Good Days.
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Date: 5/19/2023 3:26:00 AM
Creative one that took some effort on your part. That ear ought to be able to hear a pin drop from very far away. Way to go with the design. Congratulations on this winner. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 5/19/2023 2:09:00 AM
Very beautifully written in the very ear diagram style. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/19/2023 1:44:00 AM
- I knew this would be a top winning poem, Las and it was well deserved!!! - Congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 5/14/2023 8:25:00 PM
An excellent Shape poem Sotto, words and design very clever… Belle
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Date: 5/14/2023 2:59:00 PM
Awesome poetic art my friend. Your creativity shines.
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Date: 5/14/2023 8:39:00 AM
Great artistry and profound thoughts beautifully presented in charming verse. I can assure, with this, you are going to be a sure winner. All the Best dear gifted friend.
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Date: 5/14/2023 6:31:00 AM
- WooW, Las ... can not avoid hearing you ... with this ear ... a winner in Brian's contest ... - hugs
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Date: 5/14/2023 6:30:00 AM
This word drawing took some time to create with artistry as well as its message. Well executed, Lasaad.
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