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Divine Moment Will Complete Me

"MY EYES LOOK FOR YOU; MY HEART BLEEDS THE TRUTH MY SPIRIT ENTERS YOUR SOUL COMPLETELY While the July breeze combs my tresses-- And below treetops , I absorb your presence Light as an angel wing... feathery, golden-- That gauzy drape rippling like a cloud : We wander through a forest-bend in quietude, Fulfilling the space between us-- the laughter, tears As your unseen touch holds me boundless; Till meadow-doves witness a promise of eternal zeal… How gradually, moonlight clears the ground, You become a flame dimming … ascending to another realm, My soft echo humming of a godly psalm, ‘ I will meet you When time allows this body mind soul our divine union… BY DOING THE ABOVE REACHING UP YOU COMPLETE ME" You Complete Me Contest for James Edward Lee, Jr. 3/23.2019

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Date: 6/4/2019 2:35:00 PM
Hello Nette, I just read this poem.It reads to me like a love poem. A beautiful poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 4/11/2019 6:50:00 PM
What a wonderful poem. Enjoyed it immensely. Have a great day.
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Date: 3/30/2019 2:47:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go. Sara
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Date: 3/28/2019 9:10:00 PM
Love it xx
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Date: 3/27/2019 10:31:00 PM
Wow! Beautiful and very inspiring ,Nette , a fav. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/24/2019 6:37:00 AM
What a beautiful poem of dedciation and devotion..
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Date: 3/23/2019 9:09:00 PM
A beautiful write; and this challenge was not the easiest. You made it seem "doable" and surpassed what is expected. A winning poem in my eyes, Nette.
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Date: 3/23/2019 6:31:00 PM
This is amazing! So well written Nette ! :)
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Date: 3/23/2019 3:12:00 PM
A divine rendering..peaceful and serene.
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Date: 3/23/2019 2:45:00 PM
Excellent work for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 3/23/2019 1:52:00 PM
- This is gorgeous, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2019 11:52:00 AM
A beautiful verse nette full of deep meaning, you write so well. Tom.
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