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Dismal Abyss of Destiny

The young mind weaved the tapestry of dream as an expectant mother floating on the wings of cloud nine. The flower of future she conceived in the realm of desire caressed gently with soft petals as it bloomed within her. Longing to see a part of her became reality she waited with the heart filled with embedded excitement dormant, that melted away in the nightmare of relentless tears, for the premature new life was born still. Her mind took time to rise from the debris of sorrow to perceive the dented desire of motherhood return. She counted the agonizing months once again, spent unsure days in the fear of losing another part of hers. Her trepidation ended with the first cry of the child in her arms, the joy of possession flowed like a surging stream in flood, but it dried soon at the cruel dawn of the smoldering reality, for the child was born with an impaired brain. Covered with the encompassing dark dust of despair, and entangled with the splinters of the broken dreams, she waited to traverse the tunnel of bleak future to measure the depth of her misery in the dismal abyss of destiny. ______________ (It is a true story) February 5, 2021 Contest : Break My Heart, Why Don't Cha Sponsor : Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/9/2021 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a agonizing story. I love your line, "as an expectant mother floating on the wings of cloud nine." So very true. Sorry this happened. May you be blessed.............
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Date: 2/8/2021 7:10:00 PM
Oh Subimal. Such a heart-wrenching story. Such an event often causes one to question one's god and his/her reasoning. I hope a spiritual healing occurred. Congratulations on the win with this superb write. Linda
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Date: 2/8/2021 6:46:00 PM
Deep sorrow indeed. We know not why, yet submit. Beautiful write. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/8/2021 1:41:00 PM
Sublime, morose write, Subimal. Congratulations on your podium finish in my contest!
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Date: 2/6/2021 2:22:00 AM
Dear Subimal Your telling of this heart wrenching occurance is done with such extreme tenderness. Readers absorb your artistry, beautiful imagery depicting the devastating grief.... Thank you for your powerful poem...
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Date: 2/5/2021 8:12:00 AM
So sorry for the suffering in this true story. A mother cares for her young even in the womb. She caresses her belly and thinks of her growing child. Even then she can’t bear for her child to suffer and would move heaven and earth to save him or her, even sacrificing herself. She must feel shame, thinking what could I have done different when it is not her fault but she carries the doubts, the love, the agony. Never forgets, not even one that is still. So sorry God bless...
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/5/2021 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. That is a very sad thing to happen I know to a young girl.

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