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Dishevelled

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I'm clear to see, in focus dishevelled around the edges fading out or fading in but I don't look because it's not clear to me there's something wrong to have pigment but blend seamlessly because there's no colour or contrast unfinished, incomplete, unknown or still to be defined lost in my thoughts, to dream does this disconnect or seek connection to wonder... it takes so much time but here I am, to be observed I hear the affirmations they twirl like the tendrils of my hair until they've disappeared into the background then I ponder all I don't know forgetting I've been told to discover again a fleeting spark of joy

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Akkina Downing

Date: 8/15/2023 8:58:00 PM

Just magnificent! And a BIG congrats on your trophy :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/15/2023 9:09:00 PM

Thank you Akkina, much appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2023 10:35:00 AM

- Congratulations on your trophy win, DD :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/13/2023 11:45:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise - it was great to get a trophy x

John Lawless

Date: 8/13/2023 5:15:00 AM

quietude metaphoric montage of emotion and introspection. Nicely done

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/13/2023 5:17:00 AM

Thank you John - I do like feedback ;)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/12/2023 7:30:00 PM

Oh wow! Brilliant! Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, DD

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/12/2023 11:18:00 PM

Thank you, I do enjoy ekphrasis for expression that is somewhat tamed and tempered :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/12/2023 5:10:00 PM

Wonderful! Congratulations and God bless you friend, love , Gina

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/12/2023 11:18:00 PM

Thank you Gina x

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/12/2023 11:36:00 AM

Sepia, the pigment derived from the ink sac of the common cuttlefish, always intrigued by this medium. A stream of consciousness perfectly flowing, Miss Dilly. Congratulations, a trophy win, that's awesome!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/12/2023 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Anaya - it's a beautiful picture and easy to be inspired by it. Thank you for your words of encouragement and info x

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/11/2023 1:12:00 AM

Aha! I love this cool interpretation of that wonderful painting:)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/11/2023 1:24:00 AM

I enjoyed writing this, though not even sure why I started Googling da Vinci now x

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/10/2023 2:50:00 PM

Filling in or falling apart, you fit the picture so well, eloquently described by yourself, indeed fleeting sparks of joy come and go, and can leave bonfires or embers in their wake, brilliant and a Fave, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/10/2023 2:58:00 PM

You've just reminded me that I want to cook a jacket potato on a bonfire and see if it tastes like 1985 whilst watching the embers float around... I might wait til November - it's called a meandering mind haha :D

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/10/2023 2:58:00 PM

Also, thanks - glad you like it