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discordant notes

This morning we jogged early
I was back in my flat by six-thirty
From my tenth floor view of the Charles River basin,
The morning was incandescently flushed by the peach-colored sun.
The transparent clouds seemed stylistically stained, artfully workshopped,
which offered a softened, Tiffany glass effect wholly worthy of worship.

I can’t stop to admire it. I’m jamming things into suitcases.
Cramming things into boxes, giving things away.

I had a second interview Monday afternoon, for Johns Hopkins med school. They put the question to me:
“The semester starts in 18 days - can you do that?”
“Yes,” I replied, and just like that, I'm a Blue Jay.
Of course, I had to withdraw from the masters program but Harvard gave me a full (95K) refund - I think they’re more excited about my med school admission than I am.

I’m not afraid of discordant notes.
They change the landscape.
Take us to new emotional places.
Any major work is going to have them.
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A song for this:
Hang on Little Tomato by Pink Martini
It's Amazing by Jem
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Parker Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 3:17 PM
Blue seems to be your color! DrOTD 2 b sure…;~)) If your work on PS is any indication, y’all gonna be a fine physician. Blessed passage, Elfin One.
Anaya Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:29 AM
Hey lil Blue Jay! Now at Yale, feel free to disagree (discordant notes) set sail! Congratulations on your POTD and Hopkins! I'm trying to keep up and enjoying your daily posts.
Baker Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 9:55 PM
Awesome opportunity to follow your dream, Anais. Glad you had the courage to accept and go for it. Congratulation on your POTD honor! Enjoy your special day on the run. Please try to post your poetry when you have a second or two. :-) A poet in Texas, Bill p.s. You Rock!
Conn Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 8:46 PM
Keep reading Chekhov until it clicks.
Fleming Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:46 PM
Great poem! Congratulations on your POTD...very much deserved. :) john
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:13 PM
Thanks, John =]
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:04 PM
Wonderful, filled with great imagery and hopefulness! Congratulation!
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:13 PM
Thanks Kim. =]
Goldsmith Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "discordant notes" write/story. Good for you and enjoy the journey. Have a blessed day with your win..........
Nicole Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 10:15 AM
An amazing opportunity, Anais. So happy for you. :) Congratulations on receiving Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:13 PM
Thanks Brandy. =]
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 7:23 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Anais :) - hugs
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:12 PM
I'm kind of shocked (p.o.t.d). =]
Bartley Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Thanks for sharing!
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:12 PM
Thanks!
Kitchin Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Anais, I enjoyed your story and imagery. Congratulations on POTD.
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:12 PM
Thank you!
Trestrail Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 3:33 AM
So have you been binge watching Grey's Anatomy and ER episodes and taking notes? I myself prefer real doctors like House over those pretty boy Dr Ross types anyday. Maybe that's just cos I can't suffer Clooney or maybe it's cos I just prefer misanthropes. I know I'm rambling but congrats on your chosen career and your POTD.
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:11 PM
My parents are doctors, and my sister - my brorher is just finishing med school here at Hopkins. So, less TV - but still in the living room. =]
Rodgers Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 3:32 AM
Dear Anais, Life’s in motion, boxes and suitcases and big decisions tumbling into the day, and you bring us right into that swirl. I really love the heart you show, not just in chasing your dream all the way to Johns Hopkins, but in embracing the “discordant notes.” Congrats on POTD and Good Luck on your new adventure. What is your ultimate goal for vocation? Blessings, Dear Anais, Daniel
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Thanks (poem) My goal is to be of some use - some kind of physician. *shrug* There are a lot of variations. =]
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 3:23 AM
outstanding imagery and powerful images in your well deserved POTD! Congrats!
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:07 PM
Thank you! =]
Theraven Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 1:25 AM
Ahh, soaked in a summer. Just hang on Hang on to the vine ~~ If you listen to your heart the whole night through ~~ Your sunny someday will come one day soon to you. "Nothing is written" - Lawrence of Arabia -Richard
Vionet Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 6:07 PM
I think there's some Disney in there and some history. =]
Fallica Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:50 PM
<3 . Same thing happened to (son) Jake, almost. They asked him over lunch in Pittsburgh, how serious was he about going to CMU. He said if you accept me, I will ABSOLUTELY come here. He did have more time before he had to show up. Although I think if the UChicago called, he might have jumped ship. He was on the waitlist. Curious why Harvard was excited to see you go. They got a Med School too. (I was SO looking forward to the coffee.)
Vionet Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 6:06 PM
I think someone dropped out at JH and I was a last minute replacement. Harvard recognized med school is an upgrade from the MPH - I think they wish their students well. *shrug* Isn't there a joke about God laughing at our plans? =]
Conn Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:44 PM
=]
Vionet Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 6:06 PM
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