Premiere Contest WinnerDipped In Yellow

fluorescent trees bathe in the scent
of a citrus mid-evening,
fingertips tracing lemon stars
as roots house the very veins that
wake the smell of quietude: of what
mystery wets the blanket 
of sparkling air robed in yellow mist,
as wisps of neon feathers rub
breezes ordained only for crickets
winging threads of flowered hair… hush!

the settling night induces a thousand
births of newborn seeds, seeds gaping 
primeval rebirth stirring the flavor 
of another late night in hints of amber, 
and dusk slowly changes her skin 
to finest tone so golden like wickers
of coming dawn… this is my kind of yellow
a burst of light where handmaids of wind
glide beneath my feet,  the lake and dune…

this halo ever flickering through eyes’ palette

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For Broan Strand 265
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kimathi Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your well-deserved 1st placement with this brilliant piece!!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Lovely imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
Nusker Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:02 AM
Dazzling descriptions, Nette. Congratulations!
Daniel Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Wow! Worthy of the trophy win, Nette:) congratulations:)
Murray Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Wow! I'm not yellow but green with envy Nette. Well deserved first place.
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 9:38 AM
So very gorgeous, Nette. A worthy first place win. Congratulations.
Grasso Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Beautiful, Natte! Congratulations on top honors! ...Fran
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Where handmaids of wind glide beneath my feet and citrus lemon stars! So lovely! Congrats, Nette!
Polydoro Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Great poem, Nette _ Congrats on the win!!!
A   Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 9:19 PM
lovely win....PD
Jones Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 4:10 PM
Enjoyed this one again nette...congratulations!
A  Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 10:09 PM
Nette,.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~
Macmillan Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 7:45 PM
:D I like how you injected yourself with such candor in this one... "my kind" ... refreshing! Happy weekend to you, hon!
Jones Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Dusk slowly changes her skin...yes awesome you are...congratulations
Oyewole Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Congrats on your win Nette.
Mannan Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 11:05 PM
So lovely Nette, just like you luv. Many hearitest congrats for the win.
Johnson Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 11:00 PM
Great job nette. So glad you are back. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 9:10 PM
Nette, congratulations~ LINDA
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May 8, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Nette what an exceptional poem. Outstanding. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 2:08 PM
wow, I love all those nuances of yellow, NEtte. Great to see you back here at Soup and writing poems like this one. Congrats to you. Dripped in yellow, you really captured that title's name.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 7:48 AM
Beautiful!
Sivey Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 7:36 PM
Soup Mail!
Horne Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 4:02 PM
truly awesome write, Nette
Sivey Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 3:38 PM
This surely sounds like your color my friend! I am enamored by the spectacular interweaving of this creative poem! You have masterfully put together another colorful piece, a glorious poem, Great Work!!
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