Dipped In Yellow Premiere Contest Winner

fluorescent trees bathe in the scent
of a citrus mid-evening,
fingertips tracing lemon stars
as roots house the very veins that
wake the smell of quietude: of what
mystery wets the blanket 
of sparkling air robed in yellow mist,
as wisps of neon feathers rub
breezes ordained only for crickets
winging threads of flowered hair… hush!

the settling night induces a thousand
births of newborn seeds, seeds gaping 
primeval rebirth stirring the flavor 
of another late night in hints of amber, 
and dusk slowly changes her skin 
to finest tone so golden like wickers
of coming dawn… this is my kind of yellow
a burst of light where handmaids of wind
glide beneath my feet,  the lake and dune…

this halo ever flickering through eyes’ palette

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For Broan Strand 265

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/25/2017 7:22:00 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your well-deserved 1st placement with this brilliant piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:44:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:02:00 AM
Dazzling descriptions, Nette. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:07:00 AM
Wow! Worthy of the trophy win, Nette:) congratulations:)
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Date: 1/22/2017 2:51:00 PM
Wow! I'm not yellow but green with envy Nette. Well deserved first place.
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Date: 1/22/2017 9:38:00 AM
So very gorgeous, Nette. A worthy first place win. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/22/2017 9:00:00 AM
Beautiful, Natte! Congratulations on top honors! ...Fran
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Date: 1/22/2017 8:09:00 AM
Where handmaids of wind glide beneath my feet and citrus lemon stars! So lovely! Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 1/22/2017 7:21:00 AM
Great poem, Nette _ Congrats on the win!!!
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:19:00 PM
lovely win....PD
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Date: 10/16/2013 4:10:00 PM
Enjoyed this one again nette...congratulations!
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Date: 10/15/2013 10:09:00 PM
Nette,.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/24/2013 7:45:00 PM
:D I like how you injected yourself with such candor in this one... "my kind" ... refreshing! Happy weekend to you, hon!
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Date: 5/9/2013 6:55:00 PM
Dusk slowly changes her skin...yes awesome you are...congratulations
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Date: 5/9/2013 12:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win Nette.
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Date: 5/8/2013 11:05:00 PM
So lovely Nette, just like you luv. Many hearitest congrats for the win.
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Date: 5/8/2013 11:00:00 PM
Great job nette. So glad you are back. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/8/2013 9:10:00 PM
Nette, congratulations~ LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2013 6:47:00 PM
Nette what an exceptional poem. Outstanding. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/8/2013 2:08:00 PM
wow, I love all those nuances of yellow, NEtte. Great to see you back here at Soup and writing poems like this one. Congrats to you. Dripped in yellow, you really captured that title's name.
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Date: 5/6/2013 7:48:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 5/5/2013 7:36:00 PM
Soup Mail!
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Date: 5/5/2013 4:02:00 PM
truly awesome write, Nette
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Date: 5/5/2013 3:38:00 PM
This surely sounds like your color my friend! I am enamored by the spectacular interweaving of this creative poem! You have masterfully put together another colorful piece, a glorious poem, Great Work!!
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