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Dicing with Death

“Death, life’s old nemesis, comes unbidden.” ~ Quote by poet It was a soft knock barely discernible in the dead of night I was in the vice-grip of sleep… slumbering in my sanctuary serenely snugly who’s there? I wonder … from my subconscious realm a cry bubbles up,,, who comes knocking at the door in this god-forsaken hour of night my mind dozes off again knock knock knock now persistent now more forceful now with a purpose behind each knock a little louder a little more annoying I plodded from bedroom down to the front door stumbling through a maze of hazy dreams walking on shifting clouds unwilling pushed from the back toward the door and I wonder … I took a peek through the peep-hole no one was there none was seen just empty space I stepped back turned around started walking back when … another knock! now annoyed at my wit’s end I flung open the door and…. came face to face with death!

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Date: 8/7/2024 11:11:00 AM
Oooo... spooky! Very nicely written for dramatic effect! Congratulations on winning! Xo
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/7/2024 3:53:00 PM
Thanks Crystol. You did pretty good yourself.
Date: 8/7/2024 9:33:00 AM
Abdul, congratulations on your win in my contest, I enjoyed your poem a lot, well done, Constance
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/7/2024 3:44:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Constance. Appreciate much.
Date: 8/6/2024 4:35:00 PM
Congrats. Btw, how exactly does one "dice with death?" Just curious
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/7/2024 11:12:00 AM
Lol... good answer Abdul!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/6/2024 4:54:00 PM
You won't understand. It's between Death and Me! lol
Date: 8/3/2024 11:45:00 AM
Great poem.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/3/2024 2:28:00 PM
Thanks Jay.
Date: 8/3/2024 8:17:00 AM
How haunting is that to be face to face with death, and you wrote about it so well! To depict death as inevitable and expected , goes very well with the quote youv used here! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes for the contest
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/3/2024 2:28:00 PM
I have come to an age when I see death every where. It's just a matter of time. Glad you liked it. Thanks

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