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diamond diadem of dawn

I'm white s m o k e , a silhouette of titanium wings, tethered to the snowy flesh of a flawless dandelion, whose skin still remembers ~ the thawing of winter from its glass-cut edges, and how its rainbow seeds flew into the egalitarian ends of the ethereal ether... birthing ballerinas of butterfly glaciers ~ twirling with tears, warm and sacred, silken and serene, pulsating peace ~ in opalescent orchards of pink orchid patience... If there's a paradise for sombre saplings ~ sweet and pure, to cherish their innocence in a galaxy of grape-glistening globes, I shall long to be a spiritual swan ~ spreading my fairy-jewelled feathers across those jasmine mists, where angels shed their ageless anecdotes, smearing every solemn soul with soft sparks of spruce and saffron, concocting catharsis through these chartreuse crystals of celestial constellations, slowly crawling out of those thistle-thin shadows ~ and breathing conscience in the gemstone garlands of glossy greens... I shall bask in the glow of crepuscular croons, where the skylines kiss the seadust ~ saturating in Selene salts of silence and solitude, as moments gush in stillness ~ and I remain halted, in the heartbeat of fireflies, swimming ~ in their molten gold glimmers, like an alchemist alliterating aesthetically with brushstrokes of beliefs ~ flowing in acrylic rivulets, for, I'm a sakura sigh swinging ~ upon guava glittered arcs of my april moon, singing sherbet soliloquys to those who still yearn to hear the raw rhythm of Mona Lisa, caged in the kismet colours of a cosmic mural... O' dear deities of eden, I'm a devotee, 'the seventh heart of the heavens' ~ swinging in sweven sonatas of holy harps, and dancing with drowsy citrines... as sunbeams lather guardian branches, adhering l i f e on leaflets ~ engraved with alphabets of affection, ivory initials of intuition, and metaphors of meditation and I wish... the wind recognises me... heals me... as a prayer, unsung yet heard, in the echoes of a diamond diadem, once dazzling upon the goddess of dawn ~ waltzing through whispers of ultraviolet wildflowers as I dream, ascending to the rosy zen and then f a l l gracefully in His karmic e m b r a c e ...

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Date: 7/5/2025 10:45:00 PM
'I shall bask in the glow of crepuscular croons' so beautiful. congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 7/5/2025 3:12:00 AM
Hi Hiya, you are eligible to fly high to celestial constellations as "a spiritual swan ~" spreading your fairy-jewelled feathers across those jasmine mists, where angels are your company. Your imagination and power of expression are unique and as ever, I get lost in the labyrinth of your metaphors. All your poems stay above an average level with the flight of fancy and striking images. I don't wonder why this is POTD and a podium winner. Hearty Congratulations young poet friend.
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Date: 7/4/2025 12:50:00 PM
You are truly a gem or how else would you describe it so well congrats on your 3rd place win dear Hiya. Loved it
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Date: 7/2/2025 7:19:00 PM
Belated congrats on POTD! I don't always check this site right away. <3
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Date: 7/1/2025 12:15:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Hiya! Debx
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Date: 6/30/2025 12:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 6/29/2025 11:52:00 PM
Congratulations Hiya on receiving the honour of poem of the day for your beautiful poem… Beryl
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Date: 6/29/2025 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, sweet Hiya! I'm so happy you got POTD :)
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Date: 6/29/2025 6:14:00 PM
' pulsating peace ~ in opalescent orchards of pink orchid patience. ' So soothing, indeed. Your thoughts take me to another time and another place, Hiya. This is beautiful, tender and the images leave me in complete awe. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/29/2025 1:59:00 PM
Such beautiful images that float from line to line, Hiya. This is expressive grace embracing artistry. Congratulations on your POTD. Blessings to you.
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Date: 6/29/2025 1:47:00 PM
many many congrats on POTD I love your style Hiya! hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/29/2025 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine POTD, Hiya! Enjoy your special day of recognition! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 6/29/2025 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.............
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Date: 6/29/2025 7:38:00 AM
A glamourous write dear Hiya. Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Date: 6/29/2025 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Have a wonderful day.
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Date: 6/29/2025 4:58:00 AM
Hiya, a very enchanting poem. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 6/29/2025 4:28:00 AM
Beautiful Hiya. Enjoy your special day in the bright sunlight!
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Date: 6/29/2025 4:09:00 AM
A deeply moving spiritual write, Hiya, penned with a mellifluous rhythm of apt alliteration and metaphors ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 6/29/2025 1:50:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations Hiya, a most deserving Poem o the Day ! Flawless alliteration, diction, and so soulfully uplifting. I especially love the reference to the Mona Lisa "once dazzling upon the goddess of dawn ~ waltzing through whispers of ultraviolet wildflowers as I dream, ascending to the rosy zen and then f a l l gracefully in His karmic e m b r a c e .." such splendor a slice of heaven dearest poet~ enjoy. Xhugs ~ Anaya
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Date: 6/29/2025 1:18:00 AM
Ah my angelic star, i just got on here to congratulate you on potd! I hope forever you will bask in the glow of crepuscular croons, where the skylines kiss the seadust ~ and you will forever stay resilient amidst the uncertainties and so much more that life often throws at us. You’ve expressed so eloquently with such seamless alliterations and metaphors and your words truly are heartfelt and have like always that soulful and artistic touch! This sounds like also a top winner to me! Best wishes and congratulations on receiving poem of the day! Sending you light today and always! Its already a big fave for me!
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Date: 6/29/2025 12:38:00 AM
Hello Hiya, congratulations on your POTD win with this beautifully and amazing poem. Enjoyed the read. Wishing you a wonderful day as you celebrate.
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Date: 6/28/2025 11:09:00 AM
"and I remain halted, in the heartbeat of fireflies, swimming ~" ohhhh love that, it's so moving, well done on this!! <3
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 6/29/2025 5:38:00 AM
ohh, thank you sweet Paige! I'm very grateful for this very kind appreciation and I'm so glad that you loved reading this, sending best wishes and light :)
Date: 6/28/2025 7:41:00 AM
Your outstanding poem conveys an abiding need to connect with nature, faith, and the search for inner peace. The topic also delves into aspects of purity, the splendor of life, and a mystical sense of being one with the celestial realm. Through your vivid imagery and metaphors, you share a desire for an utopia of innocence and equilibrium, through the concept of natural components such as flowers, light, and heavenly bodies. A fave from you, dear Hiya
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 6/29/2025 5:13:00 AM
wow, as always you've gifted me with such a detailed feedback of my poem, dear Sotto! You've understood the essence of emotions here, with such empathetic depth. Thank you so much for your kindness always, I'm beyond grateful for the fave as well. Sending light and best wishes :)
Date: 6/28/2025 5:03:00 AM
"I remain halted, in the heartbeat of fireflies, swimming ~ in their molten gold glimmers, like an alchemist alliterating aesthetically with brushstrokes of beliefs" -- Beautiful imagery! "O' dear deities of eden, I'm a devotee, 'the seventh heart of the heavens' ~ swinging in sweven sonatas of holy harps, and dancing with drowsy citrines..." -- Love it! An enchanting write!
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 6/29/2025 5:06:00 AM
thank you so much dear Joe, your kind appreciation means a lot to me! Truly grateful for this precious support and I'm happy that you enjoyed reading this one :)
Date: 6/28/2025 4:52:00 AM
As always, agreeing with Andrea - it's all gorgeous. God bless you with love, Gina
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 6/29/2025 5:05:00 AM
Aww, sweet Gina! You're absolutely kind! Both you and Andrea blessed me with such beautiful words on this one and I'm beyond grateful for that ~ sending light and best wishes to you always :)
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