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Dewdrops

Crystal drops of dew faintly laze on rose, a leaf, a blade. They find they are in morning's haze. A butterfly wakens their daze Sips bits of sweetest nectar made then hurries to meet shade. Magic occurred as the world slept: fairies collected dew from lilac-soaked clouds, secrets kept. Drops of rain have become adept at hiding from sun's heated flue their lilac dewdrops too. Sweetness gleaned from a pansy's face; dew spins nectar, it's said. Bees and butterflies find its trace seasoned with cups of Heaven's grace and pollen, on wings, will be spread to kiss new buds ahead. June 17, 2022 For Dewdrops Poetry Contest by Angel L. Villanueva Howmanysyllables.com 8th place

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Date: 7/1/2022 8:28:00 PM
Dear Ann, your beautiful poem impresses with charming imagery and lovely rhymes. I was swept up in the delicate expression of this piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Angel’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/5/2022 3:46:00 PM
Dear Susan, I'm so happy you liked my poem. It was a rather difficult rhyme scheme :) Your comments are always so elegant. Take good care.
Date: 6/29/2022 11:06:00 PM
"seasoned with cups of Heaven's grace" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/30/2022 7:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Christuraj!
Date: 6/29/2022 7:28:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Ann, I believe the same as you that magic occurs as the world sleeps and it’s then that the dewdrops weep. Congratulations on your win in Angel’s contest… Belle
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/30/2022 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, Belle. I'm glad we both agree the world is full of magic. Take care.
Date: 6/29/2022 10:35:00 AM
Such loveliness brought to life in your words Ann! I love "drops of rain have become adept/at hiding from sun's heated flue." So wonderfully magical. Every line is filled with the mystical magic of morning dew - the "kiss" of promise to new buds. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of the new morning dews to you!
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/30/2022 7:29:00 AM
And to you also, Sam! Thank you for your lovely comments.
Date: 6/29/2022 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a magical dewdrop write. Have a great/blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 6/18/2022 2:26:00 PM
You did fantastic with this contest theme and form, anne. This is one I hope to work on soon myself. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/18/2022 3:01:00 AM
Shining dew drops and the wonderful magic they create are presented in sweet rhyme. A lovely entry for the contest ! All the Best, dear Ann....
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Date: 6/17/2022 4:12:00 PM
So very magical, Anne. Love emotions it brings....is a winner, for sure! suzanne
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Date: 6/17/2022 4:08:00 PM
So very magical, Anne.. Love emotions it brings............Is a winner, for sure! suzanne
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