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Devoted To Love

I hover back and forth under a dim lamp Waiting for his grip to open the door; My breath pulses at a beloved’s sight As one circle of tear envelops these eyes-- That my body melts away... down to its core When nights faraway plead for his return. Though a soldier’s toil rakes a heart in silence Never can love be more intensely pure... For he is an eternal fire, a song, a universe Ordained by destiny to cradle life’s hours; Commanding time its unfolding of our dreams— I am his soul-woman, the moonglow amidst tempest While he, he protects me with his blood The rush of zeal on ember and quietude, Cherishing my essence with reverence... In devout fervor, he saves me from the darkness Of waiting through long evening’s haul--- And into the gloam of morning, I breathe him in as mine. --------------- 07/04/2019 Slave To Love Contest sponsored by John Hamilton
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Makama Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 1:33 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
Hamilton Avatar
July 25, 2019 at 3:07 PM
Re-read this today it is even better second time round, btw I used one of your titles in my 20 titles poem, maybe you would like it!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 8:22 AM
Well worth more time to ponder. Hugs Rick.
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 4:22 PM
How did I miss this beautiful paean to love the first time around? Congrats on POTD, nette! Best wishes, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations, Nette, on POTD! So heartfelt!
Proxenos Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 12:49 AM
I am so glad to see this wonderful poem honoured with POTD so calling back with oceans and universes of congrats. my dear friend. So truly deserved. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Ashley Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 5:27 PM
It was such a pleasure to return and reread your exceptional poem of passionate beauty. Congratulations, Nette, for your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Michael Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 6:03 PM
Passing by and saw you here...Congratulations Nette...
Proxenos Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 11:47 AM
Hi Nette, Another gem dear Nette, an intense love poem, truly heartfelt - so well penned - hugs Jenn.
Nicole Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 8:48 PM
"I am his soul-woman, the moon-glow amidst tempest. While he, he protects me with his blood" Oh my!!! This thought moves me. The entire poem holds meaning and depth. Says so much. This is so beautiful and tender. Congratulations nette, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Congratulations on your deserving POTD with this awesome piece Nette! xxoo
Mcconnell Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 3:27 PM
A lovely piece Nette, Congrats on being POTD too. This is superbly penned!
Turner Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Congratulations nette on POTD. Great submission!
Wanter Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 11:11 AM
You can really write, Nette! Congratulations!
Sands Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations for POTD Nette! Well done :)
May Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Beautiful write Nette...Congrats on POTD..
Y. Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Wow! Nette, This poem embodies theme " Slave To Love" Congratulations on getting the poem of the day and for your win in the contest:-) Alexis
Warrior Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 8:04 AM
A double Congrats!! are in order my friend...excellent win and Congrats!! on POTD!! nette...you make this look like childs play lol...sending love...^WW^
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 6:24 AM
A great work raising a wondrous poetic voice to the highest beauty! What is more sublime than devotion to Love! A wonderful poem worthy of the honour and recognition.. Congratulations, dear Nette, on Your POTD! A well deserved acknowledgement.. my deepest regards. Blessings.
Gondolf Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 6:16 AM
Nette, back to say congrats on POTD for this well deserving poem. Beautifully done my friend. John
Messina Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 5:49 AM
This is beautiful Nette. Congratulations on POTD hugs //Charlie :)
Kitchin Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 5:16 AM
Congratulations Nette on POTD with this heartfelt and passionate gem!
Cunningham Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 1:37 AM
Back with congratulations nette on POTD honours. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 8:37 PM
A strong poem, nette. Congrats on your premiere win. Well done.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:52 AM
So wonderful a rendition of Love of high dimension! A Tribute to a twin soul.. a saviour.. a protector.. in fine poetry.. deep thoughts and true sentiments.. Deserving the honour and recognition.. Congratulations, Nette, on Your win! So pleased not to have missed this gem.. in my fave list. My warmest wishes. Blessings.
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