Destiny Was Ours

"destiny was ours"

have we felt the power of love
can we savor its light and warmth
will we hold tight each caress
are we under a intimate spell

from yesterday to today to tomorrow
not only have we not only can we
we will feel and are seduced evermore
from one fine day destiny was ours 

as sun and moon cease to shine
our love continues to outshine


SkyWatcher
04-26-22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 1:34 PM
Uplifting poem full of hope, Lisa. I enjoyed the read my friend. Smiles ~ Blessing Bill
Kiser Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:20 PM
This is quite beautiful, well done.
Deo Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 7:03 AM
Under "an intimate spell," is the best spell. Take care of all your lived ones, and Lisa's hands. Shalom shalom
Baker Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 3:37 PM
The power of Love is our destiny. Fine poetry, Lisa. Hugs, Bill
Deo Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Hi. Just know you are missed. But family & health are THE PRIORITY. Best wishes and shalom in Jesus. Namasthe, hallelujah hallelujah
Y. Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 8:32 AM
WoW! Lisa, I enjoyed this from start to finish. Love is the most powerful force in the universe. And once you come in contact with it you will “ feel” it indeed. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Horsman Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 9:34 PM
Yes Lisa, love has to be the strongest power of all, beautiful poetry, that enhances the title.
DiMino Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 6:51 AM
Love, indeed, is a fond state of mind -- blessed spirit. I have seen it cure...I can honestly say, raise the dead -- so I do not doubt its power, its immortal abilities. Blessings my friend. Well said!
Deo Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 5:26 AM
the last two lines are a treasure: faithful love can conquer all kinds of darkness. Best wishes, always and shalom, shalom. Plus namasthe, namasthe, Namasthe
Buhagiar Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 10:58 PM
You're lucky to feel love. I feel nothing. I am a mind void of emotion which is why I cannot write. I should not be negative though.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 2:20 PM
Beyond the sun and the moon love will live on. I love this Lisa. Romance that time cannot touch. Blessings xxoo
Goff Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 10:37 AM
One can only hope & pray such is true, Lisa, thank you for visiting poems I quite forgot about, but enjoyed, I seem to ink when in an imagist-trance, my preferred method...
Cunningham Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 10:25 AM
Nothing stronger than the power of love Lisa, the world needs a lot more of it. Tom
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