Destiny

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My tears, fall with sorrow, my destiny to weep; and yet, yet I find a beauty, in death . . . ____________________ January 26, 2022 Poetry/Cinquain/Destiny Copyright Protected, ID 01-1424-714-26 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Strand (1060) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/27/2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 1/28/2022 4:05:00 PM

I concur, Constance, we each have a destiny, and a path we must walk. The sadness and sorry have their purpose. I also see beauty and a reverent desire to past into the beauty of death and live again. A great deal of thought-provoking words in this short poem. I admire your poetry, Bill

Constance La France
Date: 1/29/2022 8:41:00 AM

Bill, thank you so much for the comment, and the compliment on my poetry, once I was not afraid of death, I could see the beauty in it~

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/27/2022 2:59:00 PM

Well Constance, you give out a lot and address The ultimate barrier death..' Yet what is its Properties? For one we will be completely Immersed in another reality ' the super reality' Be that endless bliss we are told of.? Or Eternal damnation.? We are affecting that while We are living here.' Better to own our Shortcomings before the Lord and become Renewed eternally.'

Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2022 3:26:00 PM

Joe, thanks for the visit and comment, well, I plan to be a good person while here on earth, repent my sins and hope for the best ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/26/2022 3:38:00 PM

Hello Constance , I find this poem very dark and sad. Tranquility & Love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/27/2022 10:50:00 AM

Hello Constance, okay. I understand. Enjoy your day my friend. Tranquility & Love.

Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2022 8:07:00 AM

Darlene, writing sadness is my forte, thanks for the visit and comment, love ~