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Desperate Currents

For of this heart, a branded stain- Unrecognized, draped of lingering whys found amidst clouded chapters now written on merciless skies Beneath a foot bridge peering up as footsteps approach waiting, counting the cracks in the board in filtered light absorbed Debris collects in the corners of my forced smile, raspy tones invade what once was my voice, though now words float more harm than good Two silhouettes, hand in hand, him and her pulling on the edges of my heart, seizing it, tearing it, spitting on the waste now carelessly tossed to the side Quickly the creek rises, cold water reaching my chest, numbing, if only temporarily the pain, filling the gaping hole, flooding my senses Now as shadows fall on this puddle’d earth and footprints disappear over the crest of what was once love… I cry, fearing the ripples as my tears follow desperate currents slowly washing me away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/18/2016 3:20:00 PM
This is just fantastic writing, Chris, I mean, sad but great! Kinda reminds me of a song I posted recently, Still thinking of you, maybe you could relate.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much John. I'll check it out.
Date: 10/18/2016 1:38:00 PM
This is sad..to watch the one one loves with somebody else...to see their silhouttes...Heart-wrenching.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 2:49:00 PM
It is one of the worst feelings in the world my friend. I'm sure I didn't capture it exactly because I don't believe there are words to define exactly how it feels. I appreciate your kind thoughts and you always coming buy to read my poetry. Your friendship is poetry to me.
Date: 10/18/2016 12:40:00 PM
I feel a reigning theme midst your latest poetry posts, you should enter this in 'words drowned in tears' contest. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 2:47:00 PM
Thanks so very much dear poet for making me smile again. I have another poem for the contest I am working on.
Date: 10/18/2016 11:28:00 AM
Another one Chris! Just love it!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/18/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for always being so nice to me.

Book: Shattered Sighs