Desire

Desire overcomes my fear I ride to her through the night Night’s coldness upon my face Nothing can stop me

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/21/2022 11:18:00 AM

The only way we can overcome fear is by facing it or, by overcoming it with an intense desire to succeed. Well penned Bill Hugs Blessings, Jennifer.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/21/2022 11:39:00 AM

I agree, Jennifer. Thanks for stopping by. :-) Hugs, Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/20/2022 6:50:00 PM

Hi-ho, Silver! Away!... (Good luck!)

Bill Baker
Date: 4/21/2022 11:52:00 AM

Giddy up, pony! lol Thanks for the smiles you give me, Gershon. Have a great day my friend, Bill

Kenneth Cheney

Date: 4/19/2022 11:12:00 AM

Bill this is so true many ways. When our desire to succeed outweighs our fear of failing then and only then can we achieve our dreams.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/19/2022 4:57:00 PM

I agree, Kenneth. Thanks for commenting. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/18/2022 4:43:00 PM

powerful and emboldening! Well said and true. Thank you!

Bill Baker
Date: 4/18/2022 4:46:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, for always reading my poetry. Love, Bill

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/18/2022 3:44:00 PM

WoW! Bill, I enjoyed this very much, however, I must admit I'm going to read it again for a deeper understanding. Excellent job. I hope you have a good Easter:-) Alexis

Bill Baker
Date: 4/18/2022 4:45:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis. Your comments are encouraging and kind. Hugs, Bill