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Designated Rain

Those designated raindrops the sky must have saved for two I kissed you in the daisy field the rain soaked us through and through Together we ran for shelter moving quickly to the barn I was thankful for those raindrops as we hastened arm in arm Sure the sky had coaxed us to pleasure it opened the door The sweet smell of hay around us made me want you more and more Those designated raindrops pounded loudly on ancient wood We removed all our wet clothing I said we shouldn’t you said we should As I gazed upon your beauty my true passion became proof Designated rain brought us together Tap, tap, tapping on the roof. Thanks to Elsa Rosee, her title “Designated Raindrops” inspired this piece.

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Date: 12/11/2019 9:40:00 PM
Hi Richard, as I have always said, some real poetic gems can be found when looking back through peoples earlier writes and what do I find? A poetic gem that sings in golden tones. Such joy sings in the heart when reading this wonderful write. I love the content Richard, such lovely images painted by your words. Have a wonderful Thursday. Blessings....Mike. A Fav
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Date: 9/7/2019 7:43:00 AM
Wow. Potw! Nicely done Rick! I see why you have such talent! Lol I can't even get a potd since returning hahaha! No biggie but congratulations POTW are hard to get do keep on keepin on truly enjoyed the read! Now when I stopped by I was looking for something new but.... I found s treasure down memory lane!.,so if you don't mind I may be back to check out your older work!? Always a pleasure reading you! Have s great weekend Rick!:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2019 8:31:00 AM
Good morning Brenda, what a great way to start my morning. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 5/15/2019 8:55:00 AM
Hi Rich: There is something about a hay shed where lovers can escape to a soft romantic bed. Will bring memories back for many ....and me. Hugs, SuZ
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2019 10:39:00 AM
Hi SuZ, what a pleasant surprise. I hope all is well with you.
Date: 5/9/2019 2:45:00 PM
Hello Richard, I love this poem. To me this poem seems to romantic as i read. Enjoyed it. have a nice day my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/10/2019 7:03:00 AM
Thanks Darlene. You as well.
Date: 5/8/2019 7:49:00 AM
A beautiful way to spend the day Richard. Nicely written.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thanks James.
Date: 4/26/2019 5:36:00 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic young love. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/26/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Sara.
Date: 4/24/2019 3:01:00 PM
Congrats on having this lovely piece POTW, Richard. :) I can see why!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2019 7:19:00 PM
Thanks Eileen.
Date: 4/20/2019 1:29:00 AM
Richard, I am so happy to see this glorious poem I faved be honored with POTW. It is so deserving of the honor. Easter Blessings my friend and Congratulations! xxoo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2019 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Connie, hugs Rick.
Date: 4/19/2019 9:19:00 PM
Big Congrats on POTW honors for your fine poem my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2019 12:41:00 AM
Thanks Robert.
Date: 4/19/2019 11:01:00 AM
Hi Richard, A wonderful romantic write -romps in the hay - a truly deserved POTD and place of honour - Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2019 12:42:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer. Hugs Rick
Date: 4/19/2019 10:28:00 AM
Sweet, romantic, well-written, Richard. CONGRATS on POTD! This poem reminds me of Van Morrison's Brown-Eyed Girl." Janice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/20/2019 12:48:00 AM
Thanks Janice, what a great response.
Date: 4/18/2019 9:08:00 PM
Congratulations on POTW Richard. Very nice! Great job and well deserved!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/18/2019 10:38:00 PM
Thanks Caren.
Date: 4/18/2019 8:47:00 AM
Good to see you taking your place here on this wonderful poem Rick. Congrats on your POTW....Maria Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/18/2019 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Maria, hugs Rick.
Date: 4/17/2019 8:16:00 AM
Fantastic piece Richard! Congratulations on POTW! xomo :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Maureen.
Date: 4/17/2019 5:42:00 AM
Love is in the air. A lovely poem, I think all of us have had an experiance in the barn, brings back ole memories. Thanks for sharing
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Kevin.
Date: 4/16/2019 6:06:00 PM
It is awesome. A big congratulation and A 7 from me for this POTW. With love.......... //Manmath//
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 4/16/2019 9:49:00 AM
Richard, congratulations on POTW with your beautifully penned piece, such a lovely romantic write ~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2019 11:26:00 AM
Thanks Dear one!
Date: 4/16/2019 8:39:00 AM
Tap tap tapping...gentle lovers...Congratulations Richard...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2019 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Arturo.
Date: 4/15/2019 10:36:00 PM
I love everything about the rain. Its beautiful melody, the breathtaking mood it creates. Oh my, and you have created a playful moment here indeed, with your words. With just the right amount of passion. Congratulations Richard, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2019 8:28:00 AM
What a lovely comment. Thanks Brandy.
Date: 4/14/2019 11:19:00 PM
I love this! You still got it, Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2019 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Becca, so nice to have you visit. Hugs Rick.
Date: 4/14/2019 4:17:00 PM
sure made me smile Rick looks like those clouds have a silver lining, very romantic and sensual and well deserving of POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2019 8:22:00 AM
Thanks Jan, hugs Rick.
Date: 4/14/2019 11:21:00 AM
Back with congrats Richard on POTW honours. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2019 11:35:00 AM
Thanks Tom!
Date: 4/14/2019 10:29:00 AM
Such beautiful writing and image. You are so talented!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2019 10:55:00 AM
Thanks, you are kind.
Date: 4/14/2019 7:34:00 AM
I was captivated by your enchanting and rhythmic poem of rich enrapturing romance, Richard. A passionate yet tender beauty. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTW honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2019 7:59:00 AM
What a pleasant surprise! Thanks so much for the heads up and visit.
Date: 4/14/2019 5:48:00 AM
A lovely romantic poem! Congratulations on POTW!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2019 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Tania.
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