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"Go placidly amid the noise and haste, and remember what peace there may be in silence."

Max Ehrmann, 1927

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A desideratum of varied hues, is the rendering of my bleeding pen; and when under duress, well, I have Muse ! I have a God sent need to write- amen, since a child I have felt this vital need; and on this journey I have found my Zen ! This compulsion- I must obey and feed, but the prerequisite is quiet time; where I go deep, deep for feelings that bleed ! It is essential for my words to chime, I write poems of nature, death and life; with an obligation to the sublime ! My heart is broken from the stabbing knife, that is this life journey and sad demand; I find all my weeping pain, grief and strife ! Often, I find muse in a sweet dreamland, wandering in the varied hues of green; and we will create a poem quite grand ! Perhaps it will be a beautiful scene; or perhaps will be darkness I have seen ! ___________________________ November 13, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Desideratum Copyright Protected, ID 11-1304-596-13 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol. 25, Rhyme 2 sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Theme Chosen #5, Judged 11/30/2020 Second Place

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Date: 12/2/2020 11:00:00 AM
Mesmerizing write, Constance:-) You always infuse your poems with stark pathos and this one is no different. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 12/3/2020 8:39:00 AM
Edward, thank you for compliment on my poem and for another inspiring contest and my placement, appreciate _Constance
Date: 12/1/2020 5:26:00 PM
Such a beautiful, descriptive, moving poem, Constance. A BIG congrats! Janice
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Date: 12/1/2020 5:31:00 PM
Janice, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats _Constance
Date: 12/1/2020 6:05:00 AM
Beautifully penned Constance. So thankful your muse found you. ;) I love the Ehrmann quote. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 12/1/2020 11:43:00 AM
Linda, thank you for the nice comment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 11/18/2020 12:34:00 PM
awesome write here, my friend - so glad you liked the poem. hope to you & cute kitty xx
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Date: 11/19/2020 5:30:00 AM
Jack, thank you for the compliment on my poem, oh yes, me and that Snuggles Kitty are doing great _Constance
Date: 11/13/2020 5:52:00 PM
You are a God sent poetess that this world need to read your amazing poems. Simply beautiful, my dear :)
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Date: 11/14/2020 5:24:00 AM
Kina, thank you for visiting my poem and for the nice comment and compliment _Constance
Date: 11/13/2020 4:40:00 PM
From the heart of an honest writer, a poet who understands inspiration appears everywhere. Beautifully done Constance.
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Date: 11/14/2020 5:24:00 AM
Caren, thank you for visiting with the lovely comment _Constance
Date: 11/13/2020 4:16:00 PM
Lovely entry, dear sweet lady! A blessing, as always, to read from your golden pen! I love it. God bless you always
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Date: 11/14/2020 5:25:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the lovely and the compliment, it means a lot to me _Constance
Date: 11/13/2020 3:42:00 PM
So smoothly your thoughts flow and form a beautiful scene, Constance!!
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Date: 11/14/2020 5:25:00 AM
Newton, thanks for the comment and compliment _Constance
Date: 11/13/2020 1:29:00 PM
- Even in the dark ... it will be beautiful, Constance - You added a high list for this contest ... I have to start growing peas :))) ... (ny new post) - hugs and have a lovely weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2020 5:27:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you for the beautiful comment _Constance

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