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Desert

So long has passed since I was brought
To the point of pure bliss, as I ought.
If no one will bother,
Suppose that I’d rother
See what talented hands will have wrought!


May 3, 2023

Copyright © Susan Finnis | Year Posted 2023

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May 11, 2023 at 8:04 AM

bawdy and brilliant lol, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler

May 7, 2023 at 6:24 PM

Congratulations Susan! :)

May 7, 2023 at 7:04 PM

Thank you very much! I love your limerick as well---airway lol.

Andrea Dietrich

May 7, 2023 at 4:05 PM

Verrrry interesting . i liked reading this, Susan. Congrats

May 7, 2023 at 4:34 PM

LOL. Thank you! Congratulations to you--your poem was hilarious!

May 7, 2023 at 1:39 PM

Susan, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick!

May 7, 2023 at 4:33 PM

Thank you so much! It was entertaining to write!

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