Desert

So long has passed since I was brought To the point of pure bliss, as I ought. If no one will bother, Suppose that I’d rother See what talented hands will have wrought! May 3, 2023

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/11/2023 8:04:00 AM

bawdy and brilliant lol, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/7/2023 6:24:00 PM

Congratulations Susan! :)

Susan Finnis
Date: 5/7/2023 7:04:00 PM

Thank you very much! I love your limerick as well---airway lol.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2023 4:05:00 PM

Verrrry interesting . i liked reading this, Susan. Congrats

Susan Finnis
Date: 5/7/2023 4:34:00 PM

LOL. Thank you! Congratulations to you--your poem was hilarious!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/7/2023 1:39:00 PM

Susan, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick!

Susan Finnis
Date: 5/7/2023 4:33:00 PM

Thank you so much! It was entertaining to write!