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Depression

He is like a door which locks her within the four walls of her mind, and there she is as snug as a €b~u~g in a rug, having shut out all things, even her loved ones, feeling somewhat d o w I N S P I R E D n yet , for after all, he is her best friend.
------------------------- 05.12.16
(Free verse and personification)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/17/2016 2:16:00 AM
Best friend, I agree. Many congratulations for your win, Kai
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 12/17/2016 5:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kai:) all glory be to God:)
Date: 12/9/2016 8:51:00 PM
I like how yours had a light at the end of the tunnel. Congrats on your win
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:20:00 PM
Great perspective! Congrats! :-)
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Date: 12/9/2016 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/9/2016 7:11:00 AM
Congrats on our win, Jo. I like your interesting metaphor.
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Date: 12/9/2016 4:19:00 AM
Well done Jo, great win!
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Date: 12/9/2016 3:02:00 AM
Hi Jo, This is such a good take on the contest theme. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -)
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Date: 12/9/2016 2:18:00 AM
Clever format Jo...and so true isn't it. Thank you for your visit and encouragement. Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:23:00 AM
Very creative, and true too, by the way. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/7/2016 11:17:00 AM
Very creatively addressed a dark matter.
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Date: 12/5/2016 12:01:00 PM
thought-provoking write that speaks volumes...well done, jo...huggs
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Date: 12/5/2016 10:48:00 AM
Inspiring? Perhaps, but only darkness. Friends? More like an unwelcome guest. Most definitely locked inside. Well done, Jo.
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Date: 12/5/2016 8:02:00 AM
So nicely expressed Jo. You have captured the essence of this dark subject in a whimsical yet thought provoking way. Nicely done
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Date: 12/5/2016 3:40:00 AM
- Great described, Jo - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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