Denied Access To Eternal Life
Denied Access to Eternal Life
When heaven’s gates are opened wide
With friends and family welcomed inside
As with dark souls I remain earthbound
Hollowness in my heart would be profound
Surely the landscape would fade to gray
As I struggled to make sense of my fate
Loneliness would fill my heart
Words of remorse I would impart
Even as late as that final day
I believe there’d still be time to pray
And if the gates still shut me out
I’d have a great deal to think about
Perhaps I could have been kinder
And kept my temperament milder
“Forgive me, Lord, for I failed you
I could have done better, surely that’s true”
Also left behind would be others who erred
And never heeded God’s wise words
Perhaps together we could grow again
Overcome odds and make amends
Love our brothers as intended
Express grief to those we offended
In God’s grace, the gates might reopen
Making room for more who are now repentant
Copyright © Carolyn Devonshire | Year Posted 2010
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