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Demon Drink

The demon drink, an innocent evil. Socially acceptable evildoer. Pint after pint, costing a fortune. For what? A hangover? You're a laugh for the first few. Then make no sense to me or you. Broken glasses. Broken homes. Broken hearts. Broken bones. Cop on and get wise. Health and happiness dies. There has to be a better way, to connect with others, have your say. Give it up if you can't control it. Before it controls you. Look at other family members. You want to end up like that too?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/11/2016 2:48:00 PM
- Alcohol destroys MUCH !!!! - Well written, Jean - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 6/11/2016 3:09:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Like you, I appreciate your visits and lovely comments.
Date: 6/11/2016 9:09:00 AM
No truer words spoken. Great writing and advice!
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Jean Murray
Date: 6/11/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Joe.
Date: 6/10/2016 6:36:00 AM
I know we've both witnessed the destruction alcohol addiction can cause - such a powerful write Jean :-( hugs jan xx7
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:32:00 AM
I was cross at the time. Strong emotion in me usually produces a strong poem. Than you for comment Jan.
Date: 6/10/2016 5:13:00 AM
Well said... Enjoyed the write... Kept contemplating for sometime... gifts of the poem... but to what end?.... only a sigh...
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Probir. I wrote this for a first cousin of mine. It's true we can only sigh, until they themselves see themselves as others do.

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