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As heart flits amidst objects of desire, goalposts keep shifting, joy mirroring pain; yet deluded we’re transfixed, till we tire, whereupon cease to measure loss and gain, opting for cessation, to cleanse soul’s stain. No sooner we choose to abide with love, our aligned head and heart, now hand in glove, inner conflict ends, bliss currents ascend, blessings in-pour from within and above, enabled then thus, when to God we bend. 31-January-2022 HMS, Rhymezone D Forms - Dizain- Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 2/15/2022 10:46:00 AM
"Bliss" and "blessings" truly do require a choice from us - acceptance of their pure intention "when to God we bend," knowing our need for God. Beautifully expressed journey from our hearts that flit" to a decision to "abide with grace." So much wisdom encased in these lines Seeker - so much to unpack - as always! Congratulations on your win! Sending you blessings and "bliss."
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Date: 2/15/2022 7:20:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! I’m so happy you enjoyed :)
Date: 2/15/2022 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/wonderful write. Love It. Have a blessed day................
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Date: 2/15/2022 7:19:00 PM
Thank you dear Paula!
Date: 2/14/2022 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on you placement in the contest! :)Paulette
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Date: 2/14/2022 6:56:00 PM
Thank you dear Paulette!
Date: 2/14/2022 3:07:00 PM
Seekere, congratulations on your Second Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your wonderful poem ~ Constance
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Date: 2/14/2022 5:14:00 PM
Always delighted to participate in your innovative contests, Constance! Thanks for hosting!
Date: 1/31/2022 8:31:00 PM
I'm glad I checked your poems. You write some very deep thoughts worth pondering. Take care :)
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Date: 1/31/2022 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Ann! Happy it resonates
Date: 1/31/2022 12:10:00 PM
A powerful statement of the taunting temporal desire that can never be quenched~time to assess: ""our aligned head and heart, now hand in glove", great line!!! :) Paulette
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Date: 1/31/2022 8:58:00 PM
Easy isn’t it? Meld head with heart, in resonance with love. Way to eternal bliss. No voluminous scriptures to follow :)

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