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Poem written for "Delphic, Delusion, Disaster, Dauntless Poetry Contest,"

Sotto Poet, sponsor 5/6/2024

“The forest is my loyal friend A Delphic shrine to me.” Emerson
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Slash, Loblolly, and Jelecote~curious names for the majestic pine and eucalypt, sweeping over the valley and up, over the forest-covered mountains as far as my eyes can see. Peering skyward, my hand cupped over my brow, the treetops are indiscernible as they evanesce in the heavenly glow. Sunlight infiltrates the dense foliage of the conifers, creating abstract images on the forest floor, whilst it indulges in rotting cones and leaves. Standing still, I perceive the distant hum of bees interrupting the silence of this natural cathedral. I meander through the aisles of the green chapel gazing in wonder at nature’s harmony in every nook; the only unusual sound is the crackle of cones underfoot. I hike through the forest’s undergrowth. In the distance, the roar of water can be heard and the closer call of the oriole bird. My eyes light upon a wonderous phenomenon, a veil of white water crashing into a lagoon; in its wake, a halo of icy mist fills the air, saturating rocks and plants everywhere! Water-filled fissures sprout glistening emerald ferns; concealed within their violet shadows, is a moist undergrowth, cool and unseen. In a little hollow of the forest’s terrain is the habitat of different species~ of reptiles and amphibians. Lemon yellow rays filter through the forest’s leaves; a kaleidoscope of patterns dances on the streams. Deep within the forest’s grandeur, I discover an obscured, old woman cherry tree~ nature’s chronicler and prophet of my seasons and years yet to be. From the canopy of a towering tree, a flock of birds takes flight. A little further on, I spot a moss-covered rock to rest upon, to catch my breath, to sit with my loyal friend and contemplate, to breathe in the beauty of this sacred place, a little piece of heaven~a Delphic shrine to me.

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Date: 5/13/2024 7:31:00 AM
Nice descriptions Sara. I liked the various sounds in the distance, bees, water, an oriole.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/13/2024 5:30:00 PM
thank you, David. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful words...enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 5/6/2024 5:17:00 PM
A pleasant journey through the forest, Sara, in a style reminiscent of the Romantic poets, especially Wordsworth of the early 1800's. Kudos, Gershon
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/7/2024 4:17:00 AM
wow, thank you for the comparison...what a compliment!! Wishing you a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 5/6/2024 12:17:00 PM
Wonderful poem. A journey in search of a temple. Your descriptions are of high calibre. It is almost magical. Best for a win.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/6/2024 5:04:00 PM
thank you, Victor. Your complimentary words mean a great deal to me. Thanks for joining my on my magical journey. Wishing you a great evening, Sara
Date: 5/6/2024 11:22:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "DELPHIC" write/great picture. I find myself in your forest. "Good Luck" Have a fun day/week writing away...................
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/6/2024 5:03:00 PM
thanks for journeying with me in my forest. Great to have you along. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/6/2024 11:13:00 AM
The magical Delphic forest. Nice one.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/6/2024 5:03:00 PM
thanks so much, Jay!
Date: 5/6/2024 10:22:00 AM
What could be more wonderful than a hike in such a beautiful, forested area, bright sunlight, and a waterfall? You've painted quite the Delphic scene fit for the Gods but thank you for sharing your lovely visions with us. Thank you, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/6/2024 5:03:00 PM
I appreciate your visit, Lin. Your kind and gracious comments lifted my spirits. Thanks for journeying with me into the mystical forest of my creation. Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/6/2024 7:09:00 AM
This is so magical. A pleasure to explore.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/6/2024 5:01:00 PM
awww, thank you, Richard. Appreciate it! Sara
Date: 5/6/2024 6:52:00 AM
Your poem transports the reader into the heart of a majestic forest, where the author's keen observations and rich descriptions paint a vivid picture of the natural world. From the curious names of the trees to the abstract images created by sunlight filtering through the dense foliage, each stanza invites us to explore the intricate tapestry of life within the forest's embrace. The sensory details, from the distant hum of bees to the roar of water and the crackle of cones underfoot, create a multisensory experience that brings the forest to life.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/6/2024 5:02:00 PM
thank you, Silent One. I appreciate your observations and gracious comments. Your words mean a great deal to me. Thanks for your visit and enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 5/6/2024 5:57:00 AM
A splendid journey through your descriptions--in exploration of Delphic shrine, Sara. Mystical images hit the essence of the theme. A little piece of heaven, indeed!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/6/2024 5:00:00 PM
thank you for your complimentary words this evening. Grateful for you and your visit, Sara
Date: 5/6/2024 5:19:00 AM
Dear Sara, Your poem is a breathtaking journey through the forest's mystique. Each line shows an amazing portrait to nature's splendor, taking us into a realm of wonder and contemplation. I just love your words of beauty and reverence, honoring the sanctuary of the woods as a sacred haven. A mesmerizing piece. - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/6/2024 5:00:00 PM
I appreciate your deep understanding of my poem. I'm also grateful for your kind and complimentary words about the 'sacred' place I hoped to create. Your visit and words mean a great deal to me. Have a pleasant evening, blessings, Sara

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