Delicate Flowers Withering Away

We are delicate flowers withering away,
blown far over the tree-tops,
to fall apart like falling stars...
and land in unfrequented places,
where no human ever lives;
only falling rain can give us that new life!


Planets and stars were made 
for Humankind alone...to endure forever,
and our Earth is the jewel of this Universe;
timeless from the day of creation, with rare
colors so vivid and admirable, it was endowed 
with majestic oceans and misty mountains: 
and we feel the need to exalt its Creator!
At night, we stare at it with astonishing silence,
wishing to be immortal...to gaze into it evermore!


We are delicate flowers withering away,
lamenting an unfair fate without any delight in tomorrow;
hoping to outlive every season...seasons
that quickly come and go
with an inexplicable haste!
These lives are delicate flowers
that offer youth a brief beauty,
then they lose their freshness...to become non-existent!


Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 18, 2009 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured!! ~Trudy~
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October 15, 2009 at 5:03 PM
I agree with Karen. Wonderful writing, Andrew. Lainie
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October 15, 2009 at 9:04 AM
loved it!!! Congrats!!!-Rhonda Hero
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October 13, 2009 at 2:43 AM
A well written and very deserving poem to be featured, congratulations. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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October 12, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Andrew >> James
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October 12, 2009 at 3:43 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Andrew. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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October 11, 2009 at 11:58 PM
Congrats on your feature this week Andrew.Rgds Brian
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October 11, 2009 at 7:41 PM
Insightful reflection with much for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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