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Delicate Flowers Withering Away

We are delicate flowers withering away, blown far over the tree-tops, to fall apart like falling stars... and land in unfrequented places, where no human ever lives; only falling rain can give us that new life! Planets and stars were made for Humankind alone...to endure forever, and our Earth is the jewel of this Universe; timeless from the day of creation, with rare colors so vivid and admirable, it was endowed with majestic oceans and misty mountains: and we feel the need to exalt its Creator! At night, we stare at it with astonishing silence, wishing to be immortal...to gaze into it evermore! We are delicate flowers withering away, lamenting an unfair fate without any delight in tomorrow; hoping to outlive every season...seasons that quickly come and go with an inexplicable haste! These lives are delicate flowers that offer youth a brief beauty, then they lose their freshness...to become non-existent! Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 10/18/2009 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured!! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/15/2009 5:03:00 PM
I agree with Karen. Wonderful writing, Andrew. Lainie
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Date: 10/15/2009 9:04:00 AM
loved it!!! Congrats!!!-Rhonda Hero
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Date: 10/13/2009 2:43:00 AM
A well written and very deserving poem to be featured, congratulations. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 10/12/2009 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Andrew >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Andrew. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:58:00 PM
Congrats on your feature this week Andrew.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/11/2009 7:41:00 PM
Insightful reflection with much for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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