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Delicate Embers of Self-Immolation

Swim my world. Under shadows havoc cry I bend this for you, pressing onto paper, a Caravaggio dawn falling westward. In madness beauty born, will thee watch the Dark machine, its gears of blood slipping through the Eternal art of madness, of war, of silence? No more On the rage of things that could have been, will There ever be, another as Empty…as me.

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Date: 11/10/2023 5:28:00 AM
I'm glad I found you...this poem went deep into my soul...
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/10/2023 8:21:00 PM
deepest gratitude
Date: 11/6/2023 7:59:00 PM
Your a hidden gem, waiting to be found, you have the gift that others don't see, and don't know why your gentle words make them cry.. Keep writing...
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/7/2023 7:57:00 PM
kindest gratitude to you -
Date: 10/11/2023 9:33:00 PM
Poignant, piercing, painful, superbly penned
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 10/11/2023 9:43:00 PM
My gratitude to you.
Date: 10/9/2023 8:28:00 PM
Wonderful work and feeling. Just wonderful.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 10/23/2023 1:03:00 PM
greatly appreciate it -

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